Reviews for Periculum
palmtreehead chapter 25 . 12/9/2017
Very interesting story, hope you feel up to finishing it one day! Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 21 . 12/8/2017
Nice one. I like that you are portraying the Jedi as wise and patient with only a bit of arrogance. They did keep peace for millennia and it’s great to read a story where we get to see how they did that. Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 17 . 12/8/2017
Yep, I enjoyed the way you wrote Buffy’s reveal to Qui-Gon. He is pretty awesome and it makes sense to me that she could find him to be s great mentor/father figure like Giles. Thanks for sharing
Talon5Krrde chapter 17 . 5/11/2017
I can see Buffy becoming a Mandalorian...

Maybe she meets Bo-Katan Kryze with Obi...
Felrikthedeleted chapter 23 . 1/23/2017
I have enjoyed this as of thus far immensely, it is a shame that is seems to have been abandoned.
tigersmeleth chapter 25 . 8/10/2016
Oomph! Please don't leave this hanging! This was so well done and Buffy is so well fleshed out!
nkh1 chapter 25 . 6/17/2016
excellent story. is there a follow up to this? or more to come in this one?
Sraya chapter 2 . 4/26/2016
At this point in Buffy she is nearly seventeen and a half she slept with Angel on her birthday and it took her quite awhile to get to the point where she could kill him so she may even be closer to eighteen
KK1987 chapter 25 . 8/31/2015
I hope you haven't abandoned this story as I have just found it and i am enjoying it immensely and I hope you start updating it again soon. I love the Buffy and Obi wan interactions
EXC RID3R chapter 25 . 8/5/2015
Great story, a bit sad that it has been left for so long, hope you get your inspiration back
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 22 . 3/25/2015
the best thing you did here was have reasonable ARGUMENTS on the why and why not , and with actual founded concerns!
and yes some great jedi come from the age of not exact force training.

however three of thsoe you anmed were only triane doutside the order because the order was DEAD. and had the foundations of super heavy weights like Obi wan and Yoda for some help int he forming...

it s a bit of the fact that... if you allow older the order itself can become more decentralized which allows thechances for greater number of split off groups that could end in some HELLISH things like schisms amongst others.

and well.. for a long while the jedi as a power in the universe has been UNCHALLENED for centuries,a t least openly they HAVE to be careful on how they train and let jedi do things.

besides the gradual sabatoge by the Sith not taken into account of course.
Justin Bwers chapter 8 . 2/13/2015
Qui Gon Wisdom is the best escpecially for a person like buffy
b chapter 25 . 2/4/2014
Loved the story, left wanting mote. Good work
Guest chapter 25 . 12/18/2013
I hope you update this story! It has so much potential.
WyldwoodFaye chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
Better not be an effect of this dimension.. Buffy losing her powers.. or the strength of her powers.. cuz that would be lame.
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