This story is actually beautifully written, but I rEAllY HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW DONT TAKE THIS PERSONALLY BUT OH MY GOSH YOU FREAKING KILLED WYBIE YOU MONSTER THIS MADE ME CRY SO MUCH I HAVE TEAR STAINS ALL OVER MY SHIRT I CANT STOP CRYINH IHATEYOIIHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHATE EVERYTHING WHY WYBIE

Omg i cried. I am still crying. Poor wybie. I loved the story though. When mel mentioned the accident i menally screamed! And when you described the crime scene, i started to cry. Omg WYBORNE! I just want to hug him. Wish you would have written about the funeral. Probably wouldve gotten more tears outta my system. Great fanfic

great story it did not make me cry but it did make me feel something most story's do not make me feel sadness and for this i thank you because it makes me feel human

I thought you made a epilogue when I saw a chapter 2,but no you apologize. WELL YOU NOT FOGIVEN. YOU KILLED WYBORNE. AND IM SERIOUSLY STILL CRYING. WHYYYYYY!WYBIE AND CORALINE WERE SUPPOSED TO BE HAPPY. THEY ARE MEANT TO BE. AND HAVE THREE KIDS NAMED,VINCE,REBECCA,AND CORALINE. YOU KILL THEIR KIDS. WHEN WILL I STOP CRYING!

XxPain GirlxX

NO NO WHY WHY WHY DAMN IT WHY!YOU KILLED WYBORNE!WHY!I CANT STOP FUCKING CRYING. I NEED SOME TISSUES. WHAAAAAAAAAAAA. IM STILL CRYING. THEY DISERVED TO BE HAPPY AND HAVE THREE KIDS. YOU KILLED THEIR KIDS BY KILLING WYBORNE. IM CRYIND SO DAMN HARD. THANK FOD MY ROOMMATE ISNT HERE. YOU KILLED WYBORNE!WHYYYYYY!YOU BITCH!

XxPain GirlxX

WHYYYY!

seriously good stuff. ive had this on my favorites for a while and just reread it again. i will miss you forever wybie!

I cried, dammit! D:

Too sad!

your a really good writer,

and this did make me cry! :'(

AND NO,I DID NOT F #$-ING ENJOY THIS STORY,YOU PSYCHO!

i hated this f #%$-ing story!it was the saddest thing i ever read!are you like,a psycho who thrives on sadness!do not write any more stories like this or i WILL hunt you down,you can bet on that!i was trying to read a nice little happy love story on the net!i saw your story,thought"oh,this might be okay to read",but BOY was i wrong!DO NOT WRITE ANY MORE STORIES LIKE THIS OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!}:[

You shouldn' apologize for making people cry. Well, I mean, you might have that kind of conscience or something, but I came close. I'm somewhere between laughing and crying, cause, wow. My best friend died too. So, Coraline, right there with ya. It's a really good story, and if your other 5 stories are like it, then you're a really good writer. I'm, I'm going to finish this up now, okay?

Very powerfull strong emotion and drama

Very good

Why must wybie die

it was sad but a good story. i, after reading it, though "hey what if they wrote a story where he comes back but is even unusual, even for wybie and he forced to live as some thing other then human." dumb as hell i know, but it was spur of the moment.

you made ME cry! it was very sad but also very sweet! overall it was great! XD 3

I loved the story because Wybie died and NO I don't mean that in a sad way I only liked Wybie dieing because it was different, I was till sad of course! It was a very moving story, I loved it! Loved it loved it loved it!