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What is a title of sequel for this story? I can not find it anywhere. By the way very good fic.

I just read all 10 chapters, I enjoyed the story, well written. It was a good pairing. I noticed in one of your replies that there are 11 chapters and a sequel. What is the title of the sequel on the SP site.
I look forward to reading the rest.

Sorry, thought I had the whole lnk there for the sequel. Here it is. ( If you take the tme to read the whole thing please leave a comment.)

?t5215

I love this story! I'm not usually a fan of the buffer/bomber pairing, but this story totally convinced me that it has potential! You've managed to convey their feelings really well, your grammar and syntax is fantastic, it's a great story in a very easily read format. I love it! I'd love to read the sequel, tried to find it using the url posted on this site and google, but I can't find it anywhere... :( Are you able to send me the full site address please?

Here's the URL for the you like it please leave some comments there.

?t5215

I Have read all the chapters in the series and i find it very interesting i understand that u have a sequel on the sea patrol website can u please give the url so that i can read it

Thank You

Hi I am new to this site and reading this story i find it really great it has me hooked could u please tell me where i can find the other chapter to the story as i would like to find out the ending of the story

Thank You

SexyD

The sexual tension in this story is electrifying LOL. It must be embarrassing for ship mates in that situation though - having to put the straps in that area. Good work conveying the emotion on Bomber.

A sweet little chapter here

“Damn it, Buffer. Keep still. You’re going to reopen the wound. Do you enjoy pain?”

“At the moment, yes. It beats the embarrassing alternative,” he thought.

- This pretty much sums up the whole chapter for poor Buffer lol

hey, i like the idea of a bomber/buffer story and haven't come accross many yet, but by the way you've started this story, i believe it has promise in it :)

do you know roughly how many chapters this fic is going to be?

keep writting

Maddy

It's not really necessary in the context of the 're just on an island somewhere. They don't usually name the islands in SP unless it's a major deployment like Samaru.

Great start to the story. It don't waste any time getting into the action but if i could make a suggestion for the future, it might be worth adding a short foreword explaining the current situation like "why" and "where" but other than that i'm enjoying so far. The descriptive text is excellent and gives a good sense of atmosphere. Let's see the rest then.

- Tony W

I think Bomber really would stay with him. Kirsty Lee Allen portrays her really well. She has the vulnerable side but could stick give a good fight at the same time.