Wait what happened at the ministry?! I need to know!

Omg Zabuza

This story is amazing.

You're writing style is similar to mine. eerily Similiar
YOu gucci

Please update soon

Please update.

someone here?

This needs continued! I hope they go back to the elemental nations soon. Harry and Zabuza need to be together for the bond to chill out. I think its telling them they have spent enough time apart. Also we should have Harry basically adopt Itachi and Sasuke as family.

Que mala por favor regresa quiero leer mas dr esta historia

cuando actualizarias? o hasta aqui llega el fanfic?

To jest bardzo ciekawe opowiadanie i bardzo proszę o jego kontynuacje

“I’m grewt”

I AM GROOT

Omg... I just fainted. In a good way. ;)

Love it please continue this story soon I really really like it

Okay stop it with really bad foreshadowing. The fox this fox that. Magical necklace freaking calling him. Its just stupid. I mean cmon. He was fated to head to the elemental countries and befriend naruto. Even the mystical clothing fortells it so. Fawkes knowing he was going to disappear was bad enough and then you did that. Subtle things are good but these are freaking glowing stop signs every five freaking feet. They are completely unnecessary. Remove the foxes please they are not needed in anyway. It makes no sense at this point for them in the story. Hell its not even representing him at all but someone who he will meet in the future. Yes i get it that its magic, but cmon tone it down. The story has barely started.
I usually try my best not to be negative in a review. i know its your story and your opinion is the one that matters. I just cant help myself this time though.