I think you accidentally put this chapter in your Hidden fanfiction Chapter 5?

Hey I know this is really old and you probably aren't going to finish it, but I just wanted to say how wonderful a writer you are and how much I love this story. It was the first one to get me into ff and it will always have a place in my memory. Keep up all the good work and I can't wait for the next update

Oh wow! Cool! XD

Update soon please. Its a good story, and I think you should add neliel x grimmjow

when is the next chapter gonna be out?

hey just wondering when ur goin to put the next chapter up. hope that you didnt abandon the story. its really good

ooooo. i cant wait for thenext chapter. i want to know whoat happenes next. i feel like a kid who just got some candy

I like your story. Sorry a friend of mine intrudced it to me and I fell in love with it! I see this was last update in Feb. I wish you could continue this because it was freaking amazing x). Anyways hope you could updat this and your other stories! Because like I said it was epic. X) (8

Awwwwwww

this is soooo cute

u r an amazing writer

nd I love Grimmjow nd Nel

I just LOVE grimmjow

write more k?

dont stop

I like this story :D

I hate aizen though,wanting orihime as a sex toy Dx

Update soon!

One word: UPDATE. Serously.

Please make the pain stop, please make the pain stop! I don't like seeing the good characters in pain. I want Aizen dead! *Gets out Aizen vodoo doll and stabs it repeaditly* DIE AIZEN, GIN AND TOSEN! Anyways great story. Can't wait for next chapter.

I liked this story/chapter. A friend of mine recommended this story to me and here I am. If you ask me about the ichinel and gimmnel thing, just go with what you originally planned to do. If you haven't planned anything yet, then just come up with something or do what you want. You should think about what YOU want everyonce in a while instead of what others want. Yeah, you are being kind and letting them choose things, but it's your story so you should write it the way you want to. If they don't like your writing style or plot the oh well,they're missing out on a great story. I'll always get your back if your story goes down just because you're taking control every once in a while. I'll review, rate comment, and PM you to support you and your story. Good Luck!

-MiloMaxwell

aw how sad Aizen is a... how can i put this lightly a a**hole yeah hope u write the 8th .

interesting chapter...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! _