This is really good I love all of ur fanfictions but I think to make it better u could carry this on but about what happens to the and vals promise to stay by skul when he cheats anyways it was really good sad to

aawwwwww that was awsome i cried a bit wen she died but im ok nw hehehehehehehe the story was amazing it was soooooo awsome :D
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Thank you so much! This is most likely the best fanfic I have ever read! I love it!

awwwwwwwww its hard to believe that this story is over u are an awsome author and i wont be suprized to see one day one of ur books published! loved the story and please keep on writing it was really good!

Hey, good story, a little OOC for me but you write it well. You capture the images fantastically and your enthusiasm really shows in your writing. Although, I'm not too into the whole Skulduggery and Val thing :/ I prefer her with Fletcher, which is also a more realistic combo for a sex scence, I did enjoy Reading it though, sorry to be critical, it's good, I just don't think the sex or pregnancy thing fit in there. I don't see that happening. A fab idea about Maya though :D keep writing! Xx

Cha

It was good, bad, retarded, weird, dirty, way too much, just right AND not enough! Congratz! *thumbs up*

OK. 1 question. Why? I hope I find out. we've got the puzzle PICTURE but not all the right pieces.
~Greaya

You just HAD to bring her back. Ruined a perfectly good death scene

YAY! I LOVE death scenes.!. I mean, if they're done well I just LOVE them! that one was not the best but good. I mean, it hits me later that the character is really DEAD and I start crying but death scenes are just my FAVE part, I mean, if it's written that they die, I can't change it, so I just enjoy it.
~Greaya

Y'no if you were planning on killing some1 you wouldn't tell them you were... well, I guess the o-I'm-so-effing-immortal badies from sp do. but still? it's KINDA silly, y'no what I mean?

Did u just -? Kill - Kil - ?
What?

Oh, damnit...Maya died...I liked her...*Depressed sigh*

...Nope. Didn't see that coming...I should have...

GREAT STORY

I absolutely LOVED this story...and the M part was beautifully done...I know that sounds weird but you know what I mean!