Reviews for Naruto: Rise of the Fallen
kerry.wallace40 chapter 2 . 7/15
Small spelling mistakes, repeated words and small sentence mistakes is all.
Great story
Tray chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
A naruto who already fought sasuke susanno who cremate blood even when weakened so get it right
Angels will bleed from pain chapter 2 . 10/23/2013
Omg omg! More! Ahhhhh!
demiread chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
this is awesome cant wait for chapter 3
MAZOKU KING chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
are you continuing this story if so please let me know cause it's awesome
The Void Sage chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
i would like to read more of this, very enjoyable!
ChronoFury chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
interesting, more please?
dalulzing chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
This is epic. Please update soon.
E-N-E-R-G-Y chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Copying the summary from the fanfic 'No Reading' ? Tsk, tsk.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
;D superspecialsexyawesomeness to the max!
AnAddictedReader chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
Sad that you haven't updated. I would've liked to read what you would put in the next chapter but sadly it looks like this fic is abandoned.
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Okay, it seems like you gained alot of mojo back, as this chapter showed off alot of interest and entertainment. Everything seems to be 10 times better in this chapter, especially when Naruto BIT HIS OWN FUCKING ARMS OFF! That was awesome.

Anyway, I am very curious as to how this will proceed. Alot of choices I would have changed but this was one of the best chapters you have ever written. Keep up the great work.
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I loved this first chapter all the way until Naruto got to the werehouse party. From that point on, everything went downhill and got extremely lame. I swear, you started off amazing, but seemed to run out of talent there near the end and just threw some pathetic scene that didn't fit in there to push things forward.

Hopefully, future chapters will restore your awesome writing skills.
Tankred chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
Wooh! Yeah you can't keep Naruto down! I was a little surprised he chose an Akatsuki cloak though, although I guess it really stands out, even in a world that has no knowledge of what it stands for. I hope the next chapter comes soon!
kiyomos chapter 2 . 3/23/2011
interesting story. Though I could do with a less angsty robin. cant wait to see Naruto wipe the floor with the JLU. UPDATE SOON!

Ja Ne!
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