Weren't Raph's eyes green, not brown? Maybe I'm remembering wrong, or just thinking of another TNMT show, but I think his eyes WERE green and Donny's were brown. love the story, by the way.

YYEEEESSSSSSSSSSS!

Grea job on the story but next time make Raph be evil a lot more longer thanks.

loved it. :3

Thanks for writing! It was a really good story

loved it. :)

Continue, plz?

yeah the black widow is defeated!

continue, plz

Oh, I love this story and I can't wait for more. Do you know any other evil!raph fics?

Well. This is pretty interesting. I like how evil Raph is evil, not trying to be a good guy/crying in despair bad guy.

yeah you uploaded! it was great!

EYUCK Spiders, pure evil, i am not surprised they used a virus such as a black widow...cool virus name though lol

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Update soon lmao

YAY

EVIL RAPHAEL

BWAHAHAHAHAA

HORAY FOR FAST UPDATES, WOH

Can't wait for the next one

BLEH black widows, i got attacked by one once

*Shudders*

UPDATE SOON

NO RAPHY, Stupid spiders i knew they were evil, bastards

I got worried for a second i thought you were going to introduce an OC o.o but YES, i like Shadow lol

Glad you updated haha, hope for another soon

This story is pretty good so far. I was as shocked as Raph when the Shredder called him son. Poor Raph, and poor Leo and Mikey, being left behind to their own doom. It seems things will get worse before any of this gets better.

Update soon. _

Aw poor Raph, I would freak out if shredder called me son as well o.o...even more so since i'm a girl rofl

But yeah! I love it!

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