I still remember this story years later. It's always been one of my favorites, altho now that I'm older, I do want Sasuke to do...more. Other than just say that /now/ he's paying attention to her, when she's trying to get over him. But since the story ends it where it ends, I'm going to assume Sakura understands but doesn't accept his stupid intentions just yet lmao. He needs to do more.

Either way tho, I'll always love this fic. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Such a beautiful one-shot! Beautifully written, I lovee the ending! ugh Sasuke better realize it sooner!

I adore this story! It’s short and sweet! The end is a bit abrupt though and I wish Sasuke had been a bit nicer in asking her out or Sakura a bit more challenging! Also I think she should have called him « Sasuke-san » instead of « Uchiha-kun » if she wanted to be more formal, less intimate.

That was fantastic!

Great story

*Furiosly Heartaching* : your writing is so beautiful, you are so talented, I love it, please never stop blessing us with your talent.
Also, it hurt a little bit that the story stoped so abruptly because I was so into it and the it just stop (whines in Spanish)
Also, also, your characterisations are in point and your writing style is like... Yes.

sort of had to hold my breath there.. whew. mistress of subtlety, you are.

Good posta mas fanfics assim

This is something I didn't know I needed, oh the feels :P
Thank you! This could easily become a multi chapter story.

So Sasuke only wants her because he gets ignored? If your whole point was him realizing how much she means to him once he's deprived of her you need to describe that more. He sounds so bland. This was really bad.

I really liked this!

omfg I love this more than anything.

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Those last few lines were just epic.

been re-reading this. Simple but deliver enough emotion to make me remember the story. Love this so much