This was truly the best story i have read on here and how i wish it could go on but to be honest i loved it and i loved the ending to
so thank you
Yours Truly
Vampgirl1600

Fred! Thanks for putting him in. I love
Freaky Fred.

ok didn't understand one bit of that

lets hope the visit is a good one so in this story Jacob did not imprint on Bella's and Edwards baby

well I am sort of lost here I ant to read the story that this follows tell me the name and where to fin it thank you

great chapter...

wow lovely chapter

ooooo great story! Nice ending.
You did fix a lot of stuff in this one, but there was still a lot that I noticed.
Firstly, the newborns should be less controled. Whenever someone makes a quick move they should get all defensive, and they should accidentally destroy things because they don't know their own strength. These are just ideas...
I noticed that you're good at showing the flaws of the characters and their relationships. I haven't quite figured out how to do that yet.
I think there could have been a bit more of a calm period before things started happening. It was literally in the first or second chapter that Alice saw the newborns coming.
I noticed a huge difference between this story and the last one. This one had enough of a climax to make up for the last one. LOL
If Mat wasn't killed, he should have been introduced to Tanya. They would have been interesting together. LOL
I like that they actually had a fighting strategy. I've read stories where it's the cullens against the guard and somehow they win with no casualties on their side. I find it a bit hard to believe that their plans couldn't have been guessed a bit sooner though. They killed one or two thousand people and nobody heard a thing.
The only thing about the last chapter is that Irina was killed by the volturi in BD. You say that she just stayed home...
That's about all I have to say.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

this is great i love it you have a great imagination

LOVE IT you have great imagination

oh sh*t (good)

Well you certainly know how to put the suspense at the end. ;)

I loved the description from Jacob's POV for his "shift" in roles with Renesmee. It was perfectly detailed.

What? Who else could possibly come now?

It doesn't look like it's finished!

but anyway, thanks for this wonderful story!

I had so much fun reading it!

That was absolutly amazing. I loved it.

i just watched B.D again. (Online LOL)

The end made me cry... Bella's Lullaby... Ugh... :)