I really think this could have happened. Cute:)

OK, this story is a WAFF-fest of the first order. Which is probably why I liked it. _ I suppose it is some consolation to you that Kishimoto had recently had Naruto acknowledge her intervention, and thanked her for it. (No direct reply on the "daisuki_ line yet, but Hinata still appreciated it, and was encouraged.) It was well written, concise, and nicely attached to its parent canon scene. I liked your portrayal of Hinata's anxieties and self-doubts about her awkwardly-timed confession. Naruto's straightforward desire to hear her repeat it unencumbered by mortal combat was nice, and more like his Shippuden self than a lot of similar fics.

Hmm... Pretty good. But the ending was a little anti-climactic.

No no, the ending didn't suck-I loved every second of this story! Great job you snazzy writer you. :DD

Very nice! Hope there's a sequel or something! :)

This is a bad fic. Sorry, but its true. The pace was plodding, the detail was weird- very vague at some points, and too much detail for meaningless parts, and most importantly, the characterization was so, so wrong. I hate how people write Hinata cooking for the clan like she's the maid! She's kunoichi, a member of the main house and the next leader of the clan. How many heiresses cook for their households- they have servants. The Hyuuga are one of the most wealthy and influential in Konoha, they have people whose only job is to do that. Next is Hinata's nindo, she never gives up. As part of the tracking squad she could help locate people or items, heck, she could even use her medical balms to help heal others. She's not the type to turn in to some housewife just because the clan disapproves- she would use her ninja skills to help in other ways.

That was good. Honestly I was infuriated that Naruto didn't say a thing to Hinata after the fight with Pain. A girl confesses to you and you don't even give her a reply? Worse yet you act as if she never even said it. What's wrong with the creator of Naruto?

Wow this made smile, a big grin. Thanks XD

Nice story )Good job.

Uhm...as much as I like that ending...it still sounds like, "Gee, thanks! Uhm..oh, look at the time...gotta go!"

it wasn't bad at all and it was written extremely well, but it just leaves so many questions.

Your write so well it's a shame this one shot is going to end here. *pout*

Oh well, but it was still very cute. Thank you for writing it.

Your Mistress.

so cute!

That. Was. Beautiful.

Oh my god. I was reading a pulitzer prize winning author's novel just before starting to read fanfiction-always a bad, bad idea... because the writing is usually so drastically bad in comparrison-but seriously? This was SO good. I was surprised, I felt like I was reading a novel. Good job, it was very well written, and sweet.

This was a nice way to have it done. So soon after the event, and away from prying eyes. Who is to say that it didn't happen like this anyway, since we haven't really seen anything from the time the village was destroyed to Imari & co arrived from Wave country.

i love this story, Hinata is my favorite character! This story almost made me cry, i am on the verge of tears as i write, well, uh, type, this. I wish I could write something as touching as this story. And I would appreciate it if you would read mine, you can easily find it on my page. It is called NARUTO: The Next Generation.

aw... cute