Just now i finished reading your story. It's amazing.

I'm a big fan of your story. Kudos to you!

ummm...can I ask a favor? l'm still hoping that can you update some JAEBIN chapter pls...

this is one of d sweetest things i have ever read,lovely please continue with the soeul couple,welldone.

U are blessed

Cute

So for the past three days, I've been reading your fic as a bed-time story and now having finished it, I'm gonna write a lengthy review so I hope you're ready for it.

To begin with, your writing seems to have matured as the fic progressed. It was a little jumpy towards the beginning but as the chapters went by, the flow became easier and smoother. I absolutely LOVED your version of Jun Pyo. He's still the dork that we all know and love and yet, somehow, he has some amazing sense and dishes out some great pearls of wisdom. Kudos to you for giving Woo Bin and Ji Hoo something to do, other than just sit around and act as Yi Jeong's conscience. I also liked your portrayal of Yi Jeong.

Now to the parts I have a problem with. First and foremost is Ga Eul. As another reviewer pointed out, she seemed a little Mary Sue-ish, But my biggest problem with her is that I never felt her. Except for that one scene where she bandages Yi Jeong's mom's hand, I never ever saw or felt her. Primarily this was because you were mostly telling, instead of showing. Don't tell me that a character is soft-hearted or is a kind person. Show it in their actions. Actions speak louder than words.

My second problem was that occasionally you broke the 4th wall and started to speak to the reader. The fourth wall is the imaginary "wall" at the front of the stage in a traditional three-walled box set in a theater, through which the audience sees the action in the world of the play. Speaking directly to or otherwise acknowledging the audience/readers through this imaginary wall in a play, is referred to as "breaking the fourth wall". Often that takes away from the narration.

My final issue with your fic was that occasionally you used words that sound similar to the word you wanted to use but means something completely different. I don't remember many of them but the one that I do remember is where you used theatrically instead of theoretically and as a result, completely changed the meaning of what you wanted to say.

I hope you don't mind me saying all of this. I say this because I think you can do so much better. You're a good story teller, you just need to polish a few rough edges. Since I'm a beta, I notice these things, perhaps more than most people. If you want any kind of help/suggestions/ explanation on how to work on the points that I enumerated, do PM me.

All said and done, I must thank you for a heart warming Soeul fic. Your fic kept me engaged for 3 nights and for that I'm thankful.

-Lea

What!? First kiss is frm ji hoo!? (no offense ji hoo, ur awesome, but u shall not touch Yi jeong X gaeul!)

finally your story update again :)
really good story dear

This is my first review of your story because recently I started to read it and I liked it so much it was so long and has sooo many changes of histories first with Woo Bin then with Ji Hoo ( i cried when they broke T.T I want a story with them pleaseeee) and then with Yi Jung ( the final was so sweet :3) I hope I read more stories from you :D

Almost two years since you last updated, wondering if you still continuing and gonna update.
Please dont leave me hanging...

I thoughtit was about Ga eul and Yi Jung! But I haven't read it all yet though but seriously Woo Bin sunbae? aww poor Ji hoo once again his heart is broken (sniff) such a brilliant and romantic story so far... I'm crying beautiful tears!

Hey, where did you go? Your not gonna finish the story? You can’t leave eager people like me waiting for an update to the end of the strory.

update!

hi my name is angelesmee ive been reading this an uve inspired me to join fanfic so i cud write my own stories so n the next month im gonna post bbf story an i hope you read it because ur opinion really really means alot to §