I’m scared that he lied about continuing this story, but I’m gonna hold on to this hope for a possibility that he will update this story !

I don't wanna sound cruel or anything but would it not be better and quicker to write the Nanoha crossover by yourself just saying and who knows maybe one day you could do a crossover Bleach(arrancar arc) just for fun or hellsing

you have a great story here but I'm not sure which go on you using it seems like you're using Gohan from the cells game but you mentioned he killed cell so yeah I don't have a problem with it I would like some clarification that's all.

I hope Gohan will have a chance to help Lucy because as far as I'm concern, this poor girl needs help really bad, as she doesn't deserve to be treated like a freak. Hopefully Gohan will befriend Lucy one day.

In all honesty I really don't know who to vote for. Both Mayu and Nana would make a perfect girlfriend for him why can't he have them both.

Hey in the future can make Gohan wear clothes similar to clark kents black coat and clothes I think they would make him look like a total baddass especially when he's in a fight.

Something tells me that Naoko is gonna really piss of Gohan instead of making him fall for her. Would you please hurry up with the next so we can see what will happen.

If I remember correctly wasn't Clark's jacket red instead of blue and the short sleeve shirt blue instead of red. Man I wish someone could draw him wearing those clothes in a running blur pose.

Love the story, mate. You're a bloody talented writer. Keep up the great work.

I love this and you should update this soon!

Brilliant as always!

Shouldn't Makai have some kind of unique weapon that only he can use when he takes control of Gohan. I would say his weapon would be a scythe created in a similar way Goku black created his but with some characteristics from Crusnik's scythe from "Trinity Blood" know what I'm saying. Maybe just maybe you can some large demonic blood wings when remains in control for more than 10 minutes.

But enough of that great story, keep up the awesome work, please update soon, finish story please.

For me i want a gohanxlucy/Nyu

Damn bro. This shit is dark as fuck. It is also a really good read. Cheers.

My two favorite anime in one fanfiction, approved! You really need to continue this. I just got to know where the story goes.