Hahahaha I'm amused how Ed went from fighting-with-Winry mode to fighting-for-Winry mode in .006 seconds.

Also... the idea of Roy and Riza beating these two to having kids is both hilarious and wonderful to me! I can hardly imagine it, but... I like your possible world ending! "First Lady Mustang" indeed... ;)

excellently done!

This is brilliant! XD
It's very well written, and had me cracking up over and over again. I like how Roy and Riza talked to them; it was sweet. Yup, I officially love this story!
-Athena's phoenix

ed n winry are just so precious! :)

Great story!

loved it! i could actually picture this happening!

I could totally see this happening. It's so funny, and rather touching in places, at the same time. Great story.

Awesome!

I love it when Ed and Winry fight. It gets so violent, its hilarious.

Loved the entire story; you're a very good writer!

This was a very heart-felt story near the middle, and I really liked the outcome. One of the funniest parts was the end, with Roy having to sign Ed's change of address papers. :) Kudos and cyber cookies to youu!

I look forward to reading more EdxWin from you!

~Cookie

Oh, I loved this one shot! XD

Winry and Ed's meaningless fights were funny before but this is just hilarious XD Poor Mustang lol

Panda.

ahh, i loved this! :D

adorable(:

I like it.

And I did find it humorous, it's a cute story.

Very funny! I loved it!

nice one