this will probably never be finished though i did once follow a story for 8 yrs and it was finally updated, ugh, th is story physically hurts rarely do i find stories that cause actual pain, but seeing how you write i honestly don't see this story ending on any good note, someone probably is gonna end up dead or suffering even more than well actually can their be any worse suffering
and yes the Autobots are idiots purple optics come on hoe stupid are you Prime! wait i awnsered my own question, hmm, The only thing i can't guess is if anyone will ever find out the truth between Bee and Wasp that's the only thing th at has thrown me for a loop

My feelings are on the point of where I might cry like an infant with everything this poor couple has gone through. Seriously, it's too rare to find a fanfic about this ship that's so well written and deep, and I hope things turn out for the better.

I hope you update soon, even if it's been years since this chapter was posted.

This is really good. Are you going to continue?

update

Update the fraggin' story!

I know this fic is likely never going to be finished but I just wanted to leave my late-in-the-game appreciation for what's here. Great work, thank you so much.

My heart hurts so much. It is very unlikely that you update now, sadly enough that there was only one chapter left, but I still thought this was worth my time in every way possible. The characters were great, the flow and chemistry between them awesome and well this was a hot and angsty ride. I suppose that the ending will have to remain up to us :) Great story!

BUMBLEBEE, NOOO! D: Longarm you sly bastard. Fingers crossed it gets a better from here on, someone has to realize, help...something :S

FINALLY! :D

Oh, that escalated quickly... Poor Wasp and poor Bee.

I can't stop reading your story, its so good! If the last chapter clutched at my feels, this one clutched them off and stomped on them. Hope it gets better for the two of them

This chapter was really hot but the ending hit me right in the feels... Oh dear.

I didn't think I'd like to read from Wasp's point of view as much as I did. Great chapter!

very interesting concept. Bumblebee is such a sweetie.

Oh, please update! I beg it of you! You can't see this but I'm on my knees and my voice quivers from my unheard pleas. I'm all worked up! I am absorbed in this so totally I'll probably regret it. But I won't have to if you finish this heartache of a dragging amazing story!