We need the sequel

where's the sequel? i can't find it. the story was so good
i want to read the sequel.

THERES A SEQUEL?! WHERE IS THERE ONE?! THIS STORY IS AMAZING I LOVED IT

I still have to wonder where Jessie James and Meowth were during all this. Were they fired or something? Or maybe Gary had them "disposed of".
Other than that, I really liked this fic. The romance between Ash and Misty was better than a lot of love stories that I have read lately, and the story wasn't that bad either.

THIS. STORY. IS. AMAZING.
Now you have to finish the sequel! Please!
I'M BEGGING.

Woo, okay, I finished reading this story in one evening (though now it turns out it has a sequel, which I will definitely have to check out :P). PokeshipperByHeart recommended this story to me, and it has been a very enjoyable read. I liked the action and the excitement in this story, and Paul's role was a pleasant surprise. Gary becoming evil was something I had definitely not seen coming, and it was perhaps a bit overdone, but when I look at the summary of the sequel I have good hopes of what's going to come. And fate didn't make it very easy for them to get together, and they themselves played a pretty big role in that as well, but in the end it all worked out beautifully. I enjoyed their bickering very much (and Paul constantly having to break them up haha). Brock was fun to see as well (I missed some of the other Gym Leaders, though, but I guess for the sake of the story it's better not to use too many characters).
Anyway, thank you for writing this story, I'll read the sequel soon, and keep writing! !

Cute

This has been a damn good read

Aww this is way too cute

This is just amazing. I love Paul as the straight man- which is a big deal since I normally can't stand him. Also someone has to do a fic where Misty is the league/ g-men agent. It would work so well

I'm so glad I found a great story like this. I am totally into these kind of stories that don't quite follow the norm. And extra kudos for all the Paramore songs!

What else do I say except great job? The action's great, the plot is riveting, and the characters are spot on...I especially love the hints of the show shining through, those little bits of silliness that would be stupid if they didn't fit so well.

It's funny you mention LOST 'cause when you said flash-forwards in the author's notes last chapter, that's what I immediately thought of. Bravo! I enjoyed this story :)

OHmygod YES!

Awww!
But if it's done, why are there two more chap-
Know what, I better go find out. .