GREAT! ( my one word for u)

Brilliant. I agree with you; this is the best in the series so far

Nice tie in. Good Torchwood stuff.

Ciao

Ohh, nice! At first i thought John was talking to Jack, as in calling him by his real name!

Very good as always. Seems the apple doesn't fall far from the tree, John is rude in a sweet way just like his old man.

Thus Jack's first meeting with John.

Thanks for writing.

Hmm cute story but there are a couple of errors: Queen Victoria was around in 1869, not 1969; and it's 'rein you in' not 'reign you in'. There are a couple others, I recommend getting a full beta check to find them all, or I'd be willing to do it myself if you'd like.

I like it, I love the way Torchwood reacted with John and when he told them he was his son.

Till next time,

Minion ;)