Reviews for Right in front of me
Golden Asp chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
I really liked that. I think you kept them in character really well. *favs*
Stell94 chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Hahaha... nothing like a suprise wedding ;)

"Now?" she then asked, the blue and green of their eyes exerting a pull on each other like the opposite poles of magnets.
"Yes," he heard his voice confirm matter-of-factly.

This is the best moment of all story for me :)
Really, I think, that you have very big imagination
aurorawinter chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
This is the sweetest story. I love them being spontaneous.
Ditte3 chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I love 's so 's my girl, right to the what she wants,asking him if he wants to marry me giggle as well as their 's so well written andi think both of them are in character.I was smiling why when it came to the wedding it was really moving and very sweet and beautiful.I saved your story to my you.
smut1956 chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
I have to admit in my mind it was taking forever to get to the gist of this story. However, once we got there it became clear that it was Mac and Stella - meandering endlessly until suddenly realizing they'd reached the place they want to be most and not letting it get away from them.

Definitely creative and unusual take on things and most enjoyable.

Thanks for sharing.

T.
fractured-fairytale06 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I do love this story... I just now found it. ) It's so sweet, that their wedding could be such a subtle event and so natural for them to go through with on a whim. Absolutely beautiful. 3
Elizabeth Perry chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
A truly wonderful piece of fiction that I'm adding to my vault of favorite Smacked stories...
JWilesParker chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Brilliant. Really, this is one of the best fics I've ever read. Really really well done.

Thank you so much for writing it and making it so awesome! I can see Mac and Stella getting married spur of the moment like that and the emotional buildup was genius.

Okay, I'm done gushing now.

~Wile
Rosi Meloni Duchovny chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
This is probably one of the most impressive stories I've read, is incredible, impressive as it seems everything I take them to marry. It's a great story, congratulations

Mac&Stella4ever

Rosi
SarahShalomDavid chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
loved it ]
hippysheep chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
WOW!that was some story!beautiful...and great beta-reader!keep writing!
Herrera chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Oh... So warm and sweet... I enjoyed it from the start to the end. Thank you and congratulations.

Paz, from Spain
lily moonlight chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
To borrow a description from someone, I am currently a melted puddle of romance across my keyboard :D Just wow! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I was utterly delighted and thrilled to see this, it's a thoughtful and generous gift to give up your time to write a story. If you haven't already guessed, I absolutely loved and adored this story! The idea of it appealed to me so much, and you have done more with that simple idea than I could. It's just beautiful. It was a sheer pleasure to read your words and descriptions, and the moments drawn out. i love how you do that, to make the reader feel almost each second and sensation. The descriptions of their kisses were beautiful, and i could feel the moment. I loved how this was Mac's POV and how his thinking works. Totally in character, from his gesture of hands in pocket, to his opening the door for Stella and hurrying round the car. those details make me smile! I loved the impetuousness of Stella in being the one to instigate the wedding, and that Mac goes along and agrees, and wants to. It was just right. You got exactly right too the flirting between them and the anticipation Mac has, and the imaginings he has had about Stella. i loved the line about his code of honour, very true. You are very talented, and thank you for sharing this, and for writing it! I just love how you use words, and such romance. I am still smiling hugely at the end, at that wonderful image of Mac and Stella driving off into the happily ever after. Thank you!
SMackedCaskett chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
This has to be the craziest wedding ever! ...in a good way :)
shawdoo chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Amazing! The emotions each went through were so perfectly described. Loved it! I hope you'll continue with this storyline.
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