I remember this one. It's Victoria messing with Alice's visions, not the Pack, not even that she's trying to keep track of too many things. It's a hard time for Alice, thinking it's her fault. It's a snippet of how she might have talked to Carlisle about it.

Oh my sweet baby jesus that was the most precious thing I have ever encountered in my life...

ASDFGHJKL THAT WAS SO CUTE!

I love Carlisle and just seeing him as a father like this just makes me MELT! Adorable!

Lila bean

its really cute-haleena-

hey! no need to says sorry it's your sotry! so you decide what the characters do :)

GREAT story love it up to your nexst one :) i'm beginning to admire you and your stories :)

i don't think ALice is OOC in the beginning, she has been known to throw temper tantrums when her visions aren't working. I love this story!

i love this whole series for alice and carslile, i liked that she was upset. It was more real

loved it!

i love Carlisle being a father and telling her not to have an attitude. once again, Jacob is annoying.

do you recall that Edward screamed at Alice for not seeing the vampire in Bella's room. i didn't until i read a fic where Jasper got up in Edward's face about it. sometimes you don't even realize how many tiny moments there are to feed off in those books until you find a little ficlet.

I liked it! Thought you did great with it.

Excellent one shot. Well written, perfect Alice, perfect Carlisle. You did a great job in capturing their personalities. You did show how well they bonded together as father/daughter. Thanks.

Aw that's so cute! I love it! :)

Dont be sorry about it, it was great! Nicely done just like the others! Alice is not OOC, it works with this fanfic! You must update soon, i love your style and cannot wait to read more!