I loved this story so much! Thank you for writing it!️

A lot cliff hangers it becomes exhausting to read! And, by the way, you used a lot of repetition, which I understand can put emphasis on what you're saying but there was a little too much of: a vow to _. A vow to_. A vow to _. Etc etc. But you have a great sense of humor and the characters are fairly like canon.

Only five more chapters! *starts crying dramatically* *wipes tears away and takes eyor out of mini bag* Eyor! We can get through the next chapter together! *Takes out samsung galaxy s4 while hugging Eyor to chest and continues to read the next chapter*

*Takes phone out of mini bag and reads the end of the chapter* hmm. *stands up and puts samsung galaxy s4 In mini bag* it's cinderella all over again. *puts on mini bag and walks away into mysterious fog*

*starts putting machine gun sway in the mini bag* so it was a dream after all... too bad. *re reads Akito scene* suspicious... very suspicious...

*opens mini bag from earlier and takes out machine gun* Akito... *Takes rounds out and loads gun* it's about time you died * starts aiming gun

*lowers shotgun* looks like it was a dream after all. *puts flame flower and shotgun in a mini bag that seemed to never get full* that's good, I never really wanted to become a murderer.

*Takes out shotgun* *bangs hide face* why? *looks up* why? *loads gun* this better be a dream.

I don't like it either. I mean, what's with the students?

Takes out flame thrower "why you... KYO SENPIE WOULD NEVER DO THAT!"starts chasing author around "CHANGE IT!"

ASDFGHJKL! After spending literally my WHOLE LIFE in my room reading this fanfic, WHAT THE (bleep,) AM I GONNA DO NOW?! Oh and by the way, great series you've really outdone yourself. AWESOMENESS. (wait actually., now I hear they call it, BOASSOMENESS.) WHOOP WHOOP! Keep on writing! (yeah by the way, if you were wondering, IM NOT CRAZY.)

I feel like your a mini rick riorden with cliffhangers

WAHHHHH! SOO GOOOD!

Woooaahhhh!

Soo swweet snd meaningful!