I loved this and couldn’t help laughing at the insistence of the matching sheets.

I'm curious, are you going to write a fanfic on what the little ones will look like lwl I really enjoy reading this one and Reap The Wind greatly!

Please continue this story! Males getting pregnant in fanfiction is rare and I really like the story..so please! 3

Interesting story here, but I'd like to suggest changing the comma breaks. You use them too much in sentences that don't need to be broken up so much .; Thanks!

I really did enjoy this, it was a couple I never would of thought of, it was awesome, I wish it would continue more than just a oneshot hehe

Very strange and very cool! :)

I like it! **

I loved this story too just like I expected.

Yumichika has always seemed odd tome though...I mean what are those things that are coming from out of his lashes? Shuuhei is hot! I love his tatoos and the collar/explosive thing around his neck and arms.

Anyway, I loved this story as well and will hurry to read the next one.

Such great story please say your going to keep going

YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! LMAO. This was so twisted, filled with so much sarcasm, so much comedy... I don't even know. It was THAT GOOD. I pity those who did not understand this. & you made me fall harder for Kensei than Shuuhei. Ohh, to see that gotdang bitch Yumi humiliated & positioned the way he was brought into the world (on hands & knees) just gives me good vibes, good feelings all over.

I enjoyed this :D

I DIDNT LIKE IT! I DONT LIKE KENSEI! I think HisaYumi is awesome but I REALLY Dont like Kensei (Sorry Kensei Fans) Kensei should just back off and leave Yumi and Shuuhei alone dammit

O...Kensei and Shuuhei is amazing...But with Yumichika it's better!

Muwahahahah! Yumichika wants his matching sheets! I find that hilarious that he cares more for that than the fact that he was just raped and impregnated by his mate's captain. I luv him, he's such a vain little bird.

i loved this, i wish there was more, great pairing, i smile, good story. meow.

Awesome fic! I usually don't like Kensei, but here he is brilliant! He has pretty good logic when it comes to getting both Shuuhei and Yumichika! Aw, Yumichika's baby will be awesome! Also the rough romance was hot!