Please finish this! it has good potential

I'm a Pokeshipping, Advance, Pearl, Ray, and Amourshipping fan and can't wait until the next chapter comes out. Thanks

Hurry up

Nice work love triangle anyone or love hexagon

MAKE MOOOOOÖOOORE SEREOSLY ü

Hey, nice fanfic. It's got a lot of shipping, exactly what I wanted. Just wright(spelled that wrong lol) more. Please... It's so good!
Ash: Yup! I'm a playa! *starts doing victory dance*
Me: Swag. *high five*
Misty, Dawn and May: *Starts throwing bricks at us*
Me: Anyway, keep writing.

I like it so far. If ur taking votes then I cast mine 4 brunetteshipping pearlshipping

so... any plans on updating soon?

UPDATE ! lol rand0m... But thts meh sooo idk but I love this story so plzzz update!

Wow. This is a great beginning for what looks to be a very well-written story. Now you just need to post more.

r u going to continue? O.o

cool

finish this, it's a good story, it just needs work

Love it! Please write more!

Hey! Even though there's only two chapters right now, I LOVE THIS FIC! I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes whatsoever, so kudos to you! Please, please, please continue this fic! I promise I'll review EVERY chapter! Oh, and I was wondering, maybe for the next chap, maybe Ash is going to see his Pokémon again with the girls, and you can make a little flirty bit between Gary and May (since they've never met before, and Ash gets SUPER jealous, causing Misty and Dawn to also get SUPER jealous! You don't have to, but it's just an idea Anyway, I'll stop making your story up and congratulate you again for having such an awesome story! Great job!