I'm only stating my opinion but I think the Pein and Itachi part is so unnecessary. more than 10 chapters about sasuke and naruto meeting and being separated but as soon as they could finally be together, you introduced a new storyline? And focused on it so much too. I mean I would've liked it more if it was built throughout the story or at least mentioned. Anyway, this is still an amazing story and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing this.

I enjoyed reading this story. I kind of wish there was more with Sasuke and Naruto being happy after everything they went through. I really enjoyed your writing style.

I've read this book over ten times and it never gets old...i am so in love with this book...it is honestly my favorite book...i always listen to Rauf Faik when i read this book because the music fits so well with all the emotions...

This story was simply amazing. I liked it even better than Twilight.

Nice story! You made me cry several times, something that doesn’t usually happen when I’m reading a book or fanfic. Your writting is beautiful. I enjoyed the story in general but I don’t know, something weird happened in the last chapters. I felt tired in a weird way, like I walked in a very long path along the characters in the story... I don’t know XD. I’m glad Sasuke and Naruto could fianlly find their happiness, although I think we didn’t get to enjoy it that much :( But don’t get me wrong, I loved this! Thank you for sharing.

-Sam.

Such a great story! I could not put it down till I finished it. I loved how every chapter in the beginning felt like a new love story and each time my heart broke for Sasuke. I’m so glad they finally get what they deserved, the LOVEEEE. I wish there was sequel of the love progression and of itachi and Pein because I loved them too. I know this was written forever ago but I hope you’ll still read this! Such great work.

Im on chapter 4 reading this story, and after a wile i. Notice im sobbing silently. This is so brilliant. I love a story that makes me feel so deeply

... Let's just say this is the best story I've read in my entire life. Author, if you publish this story, you are going to get an award. You WILL get an award.

I’m starting to think it’s sasuke that sets his death into play. It you think about every time sasuke comes in physical contact with naruto he dies soon after

This is so good but so SAD. I can't stop crying and it's only the second chapter.

I'm going to stop here I love this story so much please keep writing

THIS FANFIC IS ONE OF THE GREATEST.

I have no idea why I only started reading this story of yours in 2017. I've scrolled past it many, many times during the past few years of my residency in FF.I read the summary, and always thought that this was going to be some "Twilight"-story with OOC Naruto and Sasuke. Now, when I finally (maybe because of the tug of fate) opened this story and read the first Chapter... I couldn't help but read 10 more because my mind was blow plot is a result of your pure genious mind, as I see it, and the describing is utterly beautiful. I can't remember reading a bookfrom famous authorswith this level of depth in it's story. I can literally feel Sasuke's pain and misery, and I partially lost my sanity in the midst of reading, because his emotions engulfed me. C , my fellow author, should be a write-for-living author. For real. I'm not kidding here. I rarely leave comments on someone's story, but when I do, I seriously mean what I write. This is probably the 500th story I read here on FF, and probably the 4th or 5th review I leave. And the 1st time I'm telling someone that you should become a real author and write your own books.I swear to God, when you write your own book, I will buy it. Tell me when it happens, because you left such an impact on me with this story that I feel like my life is going to end after I've finished reading this story. That's how skillfully you wrote down their pain, love and grief. Promise me that you'll write your own book and promise that you'll let me know when it's ready to be bought, because like I swore, I'm definitely going to buy , from this day on, are my favourite author of all times. Thank you for existing in the world of writing.

this is my 4th time reading this...n I just can't get it it enough..I love d story...I have even subscribed your ao3 account and i have been reading your other stories..and among all, midnight memories is my favorite n ofcourse revenge even though you have updated only one chapter... I am really a huge fan of yours...and well because of u I have taken a great liking for itapein, I mean they r sooo hot together and d last chapter being my favorite

Such a creative story! And your writing is amazing! I just couldn't put it down. Please keep writing!