Obviously you like Poe congrats.

Well, i'd like to state this is not a review for the chapter but for the whole thing. It is so wonderful. How you've done basically all the Doctors. Loved it :D Very intuitive. I read the first 9 chapters eagerly and then realised it was like 12pm so i decided to read the other half later lol although for such a long story it isn't drawn out. The storyline is strong and one is always kept guessing and being pulled toward the next part of the story :D Very well done xxx

wil there be a sequal?

When the Doctor was telling her to go the only thing I could think was that he had gotten a call to war from the Time Lords. we know that there were at least two time wars and that Seven regenerated into the Eight during a lul in the fighting to retrieve the Master and that he had agaed visably by that time meaning that it had been at least 100 years since the beginning of Seven's era given that it takes approximately 450 years for the averarge body to wear out. I wouldn't have put it past him to 'accidently' leave Ace somewhere in order to protect her, plus we now have Eight's Tardis interior.

You may have noticed that I think the end of Ace according to the books is absolute crap.

Absolutely wonderful characterisation, I sense that along with new clothes that the Seventh Doctor's personality has grown a bit darker yet again. A sequal would be wonderful, there aren't nearly enough Ace and Seven stories out there XD

Love it love it love it. A few gramatical errors here and there that annoyed me but I still loved it. Can't wait for the last chapter to come out.

Brava. Nicely done. You have a grand plot here unlike any other I've seen. It all makes for a very exciting and enjoyable read.

So glad you are back. I don't think of this chapter as scattered (as you said). It is more like you are dropping us snippets of him. Hints and tantalizing bits of information. Well done.

Please continue!

I am liking your use of Ace's cheetahness. It gives here such a wonderful dimension. A nice counter point to the Doctor's usual cerebral nature. Waiting for the Tardis' evil plot to be revealed.

Seems Ace is 'crushing' on the Doctor. Hm.

Good thing Five doesn't have his usual suit. That celery would NOT look good in that heat.

"pleased, are you?"

ek! Whimper!

Spookier, yet! You have a talent for leaving us and poor Ace hanging.

:)

I like this. I really like this.

And an original plot idea- hope there's more to come!

Scads of descriptives in here, a very rich and almost chaotically active tapestry of a tale - always nice to see more of the classic Doctors, love Seven.

Yes... GLITZ. I have been intrigued by the back story there as well. I wrote a one-shot on the post-Glitz reaction that I think is going to seem a mite whimsical in comparison to your treatment, however... just given the vibes I am picking up here. ek!

The notion of the regnerations working as UN generations and fouling up is interesting, too. And you have the Seven character down in his way of leading Ace to an answer rather than giving it. Nicely done.

Definately enjoying this. Don't stop. Your descriptions of the TARDIS all tipsy turvy are great. Impressive. And the charcterizations are super by me.