Reviews for Broken Fates
Dymian chapter 30 . 8/4/2017
Meh. I wanted it to go the girl power route. She doesn't need the Kami or Yasha to define herself. Also not liking that the concept of Fate/Destiny and Free Will are diametrically opposed. (I'm doing this on my phone so just in case it decides to not put my name, I'm Dymian)
DeathDagger chapter 33 . 10/5/2016
Okay this is where I stop...it weird, very angsty, and I know I can't stomach him being with her mom after he was in love with her. Glad Yasha got the girl but the generalization of soul mates drives me bonkers. I felt like you wreck most cruel to everyone in the story, especially Kagome and Sesshomaru. Okay said my piece and now I'm out
DeathDagger chapter 30 . 10/4/2016
Ewww! She took the bitch back? NOOOOOOOOO
DeathDagger chapter 29 . 10/4/2016
Is it petty I'm still over here like hate them forever? Lol. And I still think this story is the cruelest piece you ever wrote
DeathDagger chapter 26 . 10/4/2016
I say hate the bitch forever
DeathDagger chapter 13 . 10/4/2016
So Sess is in love with Kagome but you put him with her mom? THE F'K AMBER! Say it with me...BOUNDARIES!
DeathDagger chapter 6 . 10/4/2016
Honestly, I don't think there has ever been one of your stories I dislike nor didnt enjoy. However, I can tell you from reading reviews, I dont like Sesshomaru with her mother, it seems really ooc. I don't at all care for Aiko's character, I feel like she is doing Kagome a GREAT disservice as she doesn't know what she went through over there. And while I can sympathize with Yasha's character, I appreciate the fact that he gets pain.

I feel like Kagome shouldve overpowered her mother, she is very cruel. I've studied psychology and it's still cruel.

The concept of soul mates is harsh, and while not something I completely agree with, in this particularly case, with this particularly character it is MOST cruel. I've read a lot of your angst but this...I sincerely enjoy your work but this one has me hoping I can stomach it until the end...
demon5451 chapter 7 . 11/28/2014
Great story I'll try to make a story of my own to be seen.
LaraWinner chapter 37 . 7/30/2014
I cried, I cried some more, I laughed, then I cried more and then I think I may have fallen off of my chair when Sesh took a fancy to Kag's mom. And then I finally laughed my butt off at the ending because by that point it was damn time they all got a little happiness.

Needless to say I truly enjoyed this story and I must admit (as much as I loved the fact that Kag and Inu ended up together in the manga/anime) that this was more like the ending the series should have had. The points you drive home about timing and the maturity of their souls is something I felt was seriously overlooked. It would make sense that the incarnation of Inu meant for Kag would be in her future, especially if she had to "correct" the past.

Lovely story dear. And I really adore Sesh and Aiko in this fic. I was rooting for him to find something to live for as well as the others. Darn... I'm actually bummed it's over.
nichellemarie chapter 6 . 5/7/2014
Later in the story you mention that sesshomaru's mate is dead or gone, but in this one Mika's comment makes it seem like she is alive. Is that a typo or am i missing something?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
WHAT! WHAT DA FAQK IS THIS!
CountryBaby93 chapter 15 . 12/21/2013
I'm sorry, but this is just rediculous. The whole story so far makes no sence. Ok, she just said that she wanted him to be happy even if it was not with her. Then why the hell is she in so much turmoil? U had the scene where he sent her back written in the beginning, and from what it said, he was trying to do it the right way. She was just being stupid and retarted. So all this grief she is feeling should be all her fault right? This story was a waste of my time. I'm sorry.
fierynightangel chapter 37 . 12/6/2013
awesome story! so glad i finally read this one! tried reading malice, just didn't get very far though, much too dark, what with the darkness already happening atm...
Phantasmal Abduction chapter 7 . 9/8/2013
J'adore.
I've read this before and by god I'll read it again lol.
I'd forgotten how much I love this story :)
ChocolateReader chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
EPIC. beautiful.
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