Oh my stars... Must you write so... so... beautifully? So wonderfully? This is beyond amazing! Superb! The writing is excellent, magnificent characterizations, too - no one was OOC, and everything, every moment, every spoken and unspoken word... time, you say? Well, time stopped for me while reading this! I hung on to every. Single. Word! My heart was tickled, grasped, grabbed, wrenched, hugged, kissed, tingled... woooow! Awesome job, dear author! The manga itself needs this fic... :)

so very nice :) I'm mesmerized.

Well you did a wonderful job! :) it cheered me up immensely from the bad day I had. Thank you for writting and posting it online.

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Ah, this was beautiful... I always really enjoy your stories very much!

Aw this was so sweet and in character

They way you wrote their feelings was just great

Love it~~

Absolutely beautiful. I actually left this window open for a while before getting to it and forgot who the author was but as soon as I started reading I though 'the diction is so perfect, it sounds just like inafrozenworld' xD *clap claps* I say we send this off to CLAMP to give them some ideas 8D

Good speculation fic. Your description and personification of time was well written. Good character interaction as well.

And I like the ending. XD

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Corrections/Feedback:

{“Ah but Kuro-sama doesn’t go down so easily.”} A comma after "Ah."

{Kurogane growled after him, snarling and turning his head about to hide the blush on his cheeks.} A comma after "head" (or is "about" supposed to be "around"?).

{“Who said anything about that?” Kurogane growls, swatting away his hand and turning away but with markedly less frustration than usual, surprisingly little retaliation compared to normal.} A comma after "turning away."

ASDF (Dutch for Arrogant Stupid Diagnotic Bike... ... Very intressting, it's like FUCK.. but.. idk)

ASDF. I LOVE THIS GOD SERIOUSLY. I CAN READ IT OVER. ITS SO SMOOTTH. Really, Can I print it and take it to school for when i' bored? ooh. please write a second chapter! liek in nihon, I wanna know D: Please do please do ! xDD

this story was beautiful. without a doubt one of the most well written kurofai, if not the best, i have read. their words were splendid and their silences even more so. thank you for such a gift

Heya! Just as I said, It's going to favorites!

P.S. You don't have to reply to this seeing as you so kindly replied to my comment on LJ

Gorgeous, and probably won't be redundant at all. If CLAMP gives us this, the world will come to an end. *shakes head*

Your writing skills never cease to amaze me...

So cute! And romantic!

It matches them so well! Their wounds and comparing! XD

I love it..and the Mokonas at the end...XD

I really liked it...and it seems like a logical end too. I've been wondering what would happen to the injuries since Fai doesn't have 'vampire skillz' anymore.

So I thought this was a rather cute piece. You have a nice style (: