Why does everyone kill Pikachu off like what did he do wrong?

I cannot tell you how amazing this story is! It’s clear that thought and time was spent on this thoroughly, at first when I started reading itd I was like “ oh one of these” but ypu just shoved the words down my throat with your writing skills and storyline! I loved reading it, I was worried since there was just five chapters but then again it didn’t matter when I just spent an hour reading this story totally immersed

I should've gone to bed after chapter one, but I stayed up to read the rest because it was just so good xD

I can really understand Ash's feelings throughout most of the one-off; it was so frustrating to read the 'wait and see', but them getting together and being so adorable together made up for that

I'm really sad about Pikachu, but I totally get why you did it.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this fic!

amazing story! but bcuz of you i needed to watch atleast 10 episodes pokemon with pikachu enough scenes to reassure myself that he is indeed alive!

i hate you! you killed pikachu!

I've got to say that losing someone that you love can be devastating. I know that for a fact. my baby brother was lost to relatives on the reservation. I hope I see him again someday. also your fanfic was amazing! write another one about gary x ash or try barry x ash. you may want to try sonic x shadow or something like that.

This was such an amazing fic! You captured Gary and Ash so perfectly; the whole thing was a delight to read from start to finish. Kudos! :)

I loved this! The characterization was amazing and the plot and emotion was really well played out. Thanks for writing this!

H-How could you kill off Pikachu! NNNNNNOOOOOOOO!

This left me with a FRIGGIN. PILE. OF FEELS. Why are u doing this 2 me?! Ur making me go nuts!

Are they gonna get together? What's gonna happen? Will there be male pregnancy? I want answers!

I must say, this story moved me. I was looking for Palletshipping fanfics and I was really sad when I found many that are rather... ooc or completely cliched, what almost made me give up in reading stories about them. But then, I found this story. Thank you so much for making such a beautiful story and I hope you will get better and keep writing.
Also, I was shocked with what you did to Pikachu, but I understand your reasonings and you made me remeber that pokémons are always risking their lives in battles for " us ", the trainers.
I am sorry if my English was bad or if you didn't understand something, I am still training. And I have an acount here, I just can't log in now.

this was reallly awesome! i loved how it wasn't all 'rainbows and happiness', it felt much more realistic! thanks for writing and sharing :)

Loved your story :) it was the perfect mix of angst and fluff. Ash and Gary were adorable. Though I'll admit I agree with Ash in that a relationship wouldn't have hindered them following their dreams. But everyone is different I guess and we all think and feel differently. Anyway great story - look forward to reading more palletshipping from you.

Okay, so this was like not only so beautiful and well written but so emotional and powerful...I can't even put into words how truly amazing this was. The whole wait-and-see thing was annoying, so very annoying but I was able to clearly see Gary's side even though I was more so on Ash's. It was just all so well executed and just...like I said, I can't even begin to create the proper words to describe this.

Although...Pikachu's death had me in freaking tears. Stupid Alakazam...I doubt I'll ever be able to like or look at that Pokemon again. That was so heartbreaking and soul-shattering...But that little Eevee that became a Jolteon not only helped heal him but helped to freaking ease my tears over little, loyal Pikachu.

And that ending...anout how we all evolve through life. It's so true and most people don't see it that way. That evolution is a constant in life and not just a one time thing. So again...beautifully done. I wish there was a more powerful way to put my exact feelings into words but just know that I loved every second of this story. You truly did such a remarkable job. ;w;