So - I get that you want to publish and all. But, being a huge fan you... I’m a little disappointed that you took away the rest of these chapters to force people to buy a story that was well written in the Yu-Gi-Oh universe AU. Retold with changing names and places which don’t have the flow of your original. I have read your previews of your retranslated version and it’s not the same to me. Maybe if nobody read the Yu-Gi-Oh version they would be fine with it. But, it’s taking a great fanfic work/story and no words. I love this story of Yami and Seto - I’ve reread so many times and it has helped so many times. I am going trough a tough time and thought to read one of my favorite reads but, I couldn’t. Please bring back the rest of the chapters back of Yami and Seto of Forbidden! Please!

Noooo! Why did you have to take it down? I was so hoping to reread this! Admittedly, Ive read this story like over a dozen times and I have it almost completely memorized but I still loved rereading this fanfic. My heart is broken. :(

I already own two of your books and I will buy the third one. But Im still disappointed this one is gone even though its nearly identical to the series. I just really enjoy reading this version better because the characters personalities match up so perfectly to the animes characters. Kaiba is still Kaiba and Yami is still Yami. We dont need to be informed about who they are and how they act because followers of the show already knew about them. But as for Hunter and Ryder...they seem to be imitating Kaiba and Yamis relationship so their chemistry doesnt feel as original or natural. I dont know...Im not good as explaining things but I am just deeply saddened that you removed this fanfic.

I hope that one day you will re-upload it all again. But if not Ill just continue imagine editing characters names and descriptions. Youre the author, thus you have the power to release whatever material as you like. I still respect you.

Wow congrats!

Such a long tussle to read ...

So much in just one chapter.
Need to take a breather after this.

Why do I have a feeling that the reason for Kaiba's situation is as bad as I originally think it is?

It is, isn't it?
Yami cares enough to ask and try!
Moving on.

Oh gawd, I seriously love Prideshipping more because of your stories on it.
This is the best example.
I feel so hot right now and feeling hot while reading this adds to the experience ...
I just love this!

I like Yami's resisting.
Kaiba wants it bad!
Here we go!

I seriously thought this story would take a much darker different rode ...

Thank Ra it's not! This is so much better!
This is gonna be fun!

The start of quite possibly the most intense Prideshipping fanfic I've read ever ... here we go.

Hello. I would just like to mention that I have bought and read your book. It was just as amazing as the original and more. I like the new characters and scenarios added too, especially the hot ones. I know you had to change the names and locations but I can't help and still imagine them as Yami and Kaiba. I love this couple too much and they match their personalities too perfectly like from the anime.

Also I really like the cover designs too. It's really unique and stands out from any other romance novel I've seen and I don't read a lot of them either.

You're so lucky to have made your fanfic into a wonderfully crafted real piece of literature. And you deserve it too. I absolutely love your story and characters. They're not overly cliche but actually have genuine reactions as to how people with their personalities would react in real life.

As much as I would like to write a comment on amazon or goodreads, I'm afraid I'm too embarrassed if anyone I knew would see it. I'm truly sorry and ashamed to say. Also I don't have any friends or followers who would support your work so I wouldn't have been of much help anyway. But I will continue to follow your progress and I look forward to buying the rest of your books.

Sincerely,
KlutzyKitty

This story was amazing!
Thank you for sharing it

This is such an amazing fic and I wish you all the best with your published story! Best of luck! I'll put it on my to do list, and I hope I can still imagine Kaiba and Yami in their place ;3

Well I know what I’ll be buying on payday. :-) congratulations on publishing your book! I look forward to reading it. I’ve always loved this story.

Hi!
This is so great! The first time a read this story I love it! Is so great that you have the chance to make it this big! Congratulations! As one of your biggest fans all buy that book proudly.
So excited to here more of you in the future!

I have been blessed on this day !thank you for continuing doing what you love to do! Congratulations!