'*Making out* just fine on your own'

Man, that was one hellava comeback! Much love to this fanfic! 3

Yay! I hate MA rated stories. It's not necessary to spell out every freakin' graphic detail. This was just right, lol.

LOVE IT! OMG THIS WAS SO FUNNY... Everybody was just looking at me weird cracking up at this

that was good i liked it :):):):)

LOVE it! Yeah, NC17 it's not, lol, but who needs that crap when you write like you do? Sweet, simple, adorable and mmm... very satisfying.

Well crafted and well played. Thanks so much for writing and sharing!

This is so precious! "Nothing is ever going to be close enough"...great writing! They are so happy and sweet and just enthusing into this new relationship. Wonderful stuff! And Embry finding them is so right. Thanks for writing, and if this is just a whim I have to read the rest of your stories!

I LOVE it! Glad to have found it by accident. Keep writing please.

HAHAHAHAHHA! Loved it :))

I grinned like an idiot the entire time I was reading this. Funny, sweet, brilliant... I want more!

This is amazing! I found it absolutely hilarious and gripping! You really should write more like this because it's better than half the other writers trying to do humourous one-shots. Please write more, I adore this and was laughing at some parts and holding my breath at others. Please, please, please!

I've favourited this because you did such a great job! Keep it up!

ColourMeChaos :) x

Have read this before, but read it again today, so wanted to say that this is SOOOO sweet. Love the innocence of it all and the colors of the paint. Thanks for sharing such a joyous little snippet in the lives of Jake and Bella - no vamps and no angst.

Great story!

just so you know AMAZING STORY! :) completely hot, cute and hilarious at the same time! (something I assure you is rare to find) ;) the first bit about sneaking up on him was hilarious :)

i loved it! i am one of the biggest BellaXJacob fans ever!

Girl this was pure genius. loved it, made me chuckle loudly and i am in work so slap on wrist. I could just imagine the little red handprints all down his abs. they are so caught. you should do a chapter of the after effects, i am sure the pack will have a field day when embry phases.