I can TOTALLY see that happening.

Good job.

I almost DISliked this when Sagera had Bonta-kun at gunpoint, but...good one!

lol great ending

OMG, I LOVE this, so funny and cute! Very good imagination in this story. I can actually see this happening, and I snickered a lot. Good job!

Okay, that was nothing less than I would expect from a story which needed 3 years to be written. Really great :)

I couldnt stop laughing!

Loved it! "I'm the captain, general, president, queen, and dictator of this location!" CLASSIC!

I was half expecting at the end to find out that Wraith had actually, in fact, put a camera in Bonta-kun. :)

I entered into this story not expecting much, admittedly. Tag stories, in my experience, are rarely a decent potential addition to an episode. They lack depth, characterization, and fitting continuation to connect the two. I came out of your story genuinely surprised and laughing hysterically. Sousuke and Kaname were SO in-character, I was completely amazed. The situations were something I could easily imagine happening in canon. Very nicely done. I loved it.

Also, the last line was hilarious. XD

Oh My gosh I Seriously loved this Chapter! Probably my Fav! :D This made me laugh and get excited! I really wish this was animated in the series! Good job on this! w

haha that was awesome! I almost died laughing when Kaname got back from the drug store. That was pure genius!

wahahahahahaha!

i hope this has a part 2!

i'd like to know what sousuke'd do if he found out what exactly he did...

teeheehee...

Love this!

Delirious Sousuke is the best. I love how endearing he is, even when he's making a mess and driving Kaname out of her mind.

I loved reading this! Made me laugh so hard :) great job!

Yay, such a cute and funny story :D I really loved it~