This was really well done- great story, great emotions, and awesome writing!

Great little story. I like how Dean is obviously counting down his days, but isn't being bitchy about out. He just wants to enjoy himself and feel as much as possible. I have to say I really really liked the car sex. You wrote that expertly. Almost felt like I was there myself...if only. Wonderful work!

Felt like I had the wind knocked out of me or gone through a blender. What a powerhouse of a story.

I also read chemm80's fic over on LJ and it was superb. But then, she usually is. I keep thinking she puts everything over here on ff so I appreciate the recommend/rewrite.

Phoebe

Amazing fic! I loved how you examined Dean's reaction to Sam's over-protectiveness. It was wonderfully in-character and the Dean/OFC scene was nice too.

The prose and descriptions were also well-written and quite tasty.

Sorry for my odd usage of adjectives, but I loved the fic!

Mystery Spot is the best episode ever.

is a real piece of art,you know that?It's such a great characterisation of Dean...this dream,it's really a psychological analysis and I'm also blown away by the way you described all the flashback -which was really authentic and SO real - and then the present part.

I love this little story,really,I do.

Keep going!

Kritty

*Takes a deep breath*

Because, you know, we kind of need one after reading this... uff!

Awesome work, dude! You literally stole my breath away. Loved it!

Another great story that perfectly shows the unbearable pressure they're under. The respective dreams mirror their fears - the fact that these are old dreams from childhood that still resonate with where they are now just highlights again their bond. Young Sam's dream particularly. The repetition of the impression of weight and pressure is very effective - Dean's arm on young Sam; girl on Dean; weight of air pressure stopping Dream Dean getting to Sam (loved that whole description of the red cliff edge BTW!); the pressure in the motel room and the weight of Sam's fear.

All SO good!

You captured the stifling atmosphere between Dean and Sammy so well, I almost stopped breathing LOL XD - wonderful angsty piece, Sam and Dean's fears mirroring each others, Sam over-protective while poor Dean feels suffocated! It was fantastic! I truly hope you'll just give up your day job and write for us 24/7 *crosses fingers* :D

Huggles and luv

Mish :D

Wow, you did it again... I love your writing SO much, girl. You've got such a heartbreaking style, both raw and poetic. Right now? You've definitely become one of my favourite writers here.

You won't happen to have some original fiction too, will you?

Thanks for sharing!

L xx

Was this just a one-shot? Whatever it was, it was damned good.

I loved the juxtaposition of both dreams: Sam's childhood fear of Dean spontaneously stopping breathing in his sleep and Dean's childhood dream of Sam and the cliff and not being able to reach him. So poignant and bittersweet and.. Guh, just AMAZING!

You are rapidly becoming one of my favourites, girl! (And on that note, I add you to my favourites list).

an amazing piece! very well written. you did a marvelous job tying everything in!