Not too bad. Would be a good idea for a book series - The Son of Jason Bourne! Scourge of All Who Threaten U.S. Security.

Where is the rest? What about after ultimatum! Will Jason ever find out? This to good to have ended!

That's one of the best one liners ever: 'Just because he might grow up to be a heterosexual is no reason for him not to have a sense of style.' It should have been on Will and Grace, it's so good.

This is truly an incredible story. I have read it twice and loved it even more the second time around. I know it's been years, but if you ever post the rest of your wonderful story, I will definitely read it and relish every word. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful Jason and Nicky pairing.

Ohhhh noooo, I just read this whole thing in like 4 hours and you haven't finished it! :( :( :(
It was a great read, I was looking forward to seeing Bourne and Nicky reunited. Le Sigh.
At the very least accept my thanks for an entertaining story.

I won't lie, I'm trolling old Bourne/Nicky match fics because I'm devo about the latest movie. I really like this so far - is it complete?

I've seen a couple of baby stories from this pairing, but like the gay daddy option of adopting the child, that's a new one and I'm chuckling away at the obvious care, love and affection the three of them all have for each other.

It was enjoyable to see that behind-the-scenes look to Bourne, too. Looking forward to reading more.

I stumbled across your story today & all I can say is...wow. I couldn't put it down! You have weaved a complex, yet authentic precursor of events leading up to & then throughout movie-verse. My hat goes off to you, truly you are a talented writer with a keen eye for details. I know the story hasn't been updated in quite some time but I hope you'll come back & finish it someday. I'll keep my fingers crossed! Love it, great job! :)

WooHoo! I finally got to read the illusive first section of chapter one, and I loved it! And now I'm all caught up with the rest of the story. Please tell me that sometime in the "near" future you plan on continuing this magnificantly, awesomely, brilliant story of your?! Please? I would really love to see the reunion you have planned for our Jason & Nicky. ;-)

Found the beginning! Love it!

Wow I really wish this had been finished. phenomenal work. What a shame.

Read in a day. No idea where I got the link but it inspired me to watch the movies for the 100th time. Please update or finish one day. It is outstanding

Wow...um...just wow.

Amazing story, I love it all, the entire thing. I know you've probably lost inspiration for this story, and maybe someday you'll come back to it...but just WOW!

I honestly really want to know what you had planned. I wish we could've seen Jason finding out about Tristan, it would've been such a turning point in the story.

Nevertheless, this was a real pleasure to read, and you've got a real talent writing-wise.

OMG it can't end there... Really? I tore through this in a day, you really must finish it. I totally kept waiting for her to get busted on her scar, especially at the spa with her mother; I was thinking after all of this she is totally getting busted here. I was waiting for the bikini waxier to ask how old her kid was in front of her mom, or later for Zorn to figure it out.

I really dug how you talked about Jason using condoms later on, but not the first time as it wasn't planned. I had a lot of fun reading this, I thought it could have been a little juicer or have or more action, but what was there was five star. I really loved the fight in her apartment and especially that she didn't come out unscathed, but completely torn up.

The Professor part seemed a little weird to me at first, I thought you were going to go the other way with it and have him watching out for her since Jason was gone, but what you did fit the movie scene at the carnival perfectly... I always wondered in the movie why he snatched the folder from her and treated her like dirt when they portray him in such a good light. Maybe if he wasn't so nice at first, or if he was doing both... 'I will watch out for Castel because I hate his ass, but you aren't going to screw with my head like you did with Bourne...'? Wonderful insight there in explaining the movie scene at the Carnival.

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT

Please reread part of it, it will inspire you, trust me... you write great stuff.

Something I haven't seen yet in any of the fanfics is Parsons looking for Marie in order to find Bourne. This would fit great where you stopped, two love struck women who have no idea where he is meeting... it boggles the mind...

Anyway, thank you for all of the hard work, I know how difficult it can be. Good luck to you out there...

I am loving it so far, thanks for sharing it, I can't wait to read more...

THis is simply genius... part one was epic! I hope to god you finish this story... wow...