Great story is there more

Your love for the Goblin King and the story of the Labyrinth sets this story aglow. Your talent of course, were vital to its expression, and I am grateful that I have the benefit of reading this gem. Thank you.

I do like that you have Jareth and Sarah mostly talk as civil and mature adults for the last couple of chapters. This is much preferable to either of them being bratty or unreasonable.

I loved this story and dearly wish for it to continue. Although, I’m not sure why it’s rated M. It definitely needs more intimacy lol!

An interesting take on the story. Its nice to see one where Sarah and Jareth aren't constantly at each others throats. I wonder though, when Oberon asks Jareth if he had a hand in causing Toby to wish away Sarah, he claims innocence, but when he explains to Sarah, he strongly implies that he did. Did he lie? Have I misunderstood? Or is it an inconsistency?
'Til next time :)

Love it good work

I swear I just love your writing, you are such a bard. Fine storytelling. I have so many of my our labyrinth stories as my favorites.

This was a really cute story thanks for posting it.

Amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it.

First off, I love that you made it 13 chapters long. Secondly, great story, very few errors, and I thoroughly enjoyed the lore. :3

I just regret Ludo and Didymus weren't more in the story. Didymus would have been funny.

I enjoyed this story as well. I'll be sure to browse all your fics sometime in the future.

I liked it. A lot. Would it be bad of me to say I'd wondered at Jeff being part far to enchant her parents to make Satag think she should marry him before his half lung state was revealed? I hope auto correct us working the right way for my blathering review.

{claps} Beautiful and wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it very much. Amazing writing.

Aim on an iPad but laughing my head off at j and s .this is delightful