I love the last part! i think its fantastic!

Very cute. The only thing that got me was how you never really gave any premise for their relationship, they just were suddenly friends, but I did like the way you went with the prompts. Overall, it was pretty good.

Wow. This story is unreal, so beautiful and symbolic. I had an urge to read Rose and Scorpius because they're a beautiful couple, even though many people interpret them by bickering and than they fall in love. But, this was just...wow. I loved it. Each subject brought Rose into his perspective, and how he felt when he saw the carefree Gryffindors made me smile. I'd have to say the one I love the most is "(you)" so...agh, beautiful.

I've never read something like this before! This idea, the construction was absolutely beautiful, unique. I do love Rose/Scorpius and you've captured it well and I especially liked the ending. There is something lacking and I'm not sure what it is. Could it be that actual words and writing? (I don't know) Everything except for this one missing element is great. Sorry I can't even put my finger on what it is exactly.

Aww! Same grammar mistakes, but I really enjoyed this. The idea was unique and I loved the ending. :] Great job!

Utter yes :)

I wasn't sure where you were going with this, although I did enjoy how well you brought the scent into each section . . . but the end was the best. . . ."finally she smells like you've always wanted her to. She smells like you." Fantastic!

Did you know that your sense of smell is the scent most connected to memory? I learned that in pysch. Anyway, please keep writing and sharing.

Good idea. Very creative.

So, so, so cute _

I love how he compares her to everything and anything that crosses his path.

And the part with the change of hair color is so funny and cute at the same time because even though he completely hates it he still tells her it's beautiful.

And then the you part. I loved it.

This was utterly amazing! Beautiful and captivating and cool and sweet and wonderful... And that end, Merlin, that end...

unique, me? WHY THANK YOU! of course, everyone is unique so that's neither here nor there really. I loved that, especially the end. Scorpius is so weird it seems like he sniffs everyone hehe, or maybe I'm just jealous that he can smell them instead of having a stupid stuffed up nose...

Why did Scorpius' friend know what Rosie smelled like? I guess they are in the same year...

I love this! It's very unique and it makes me love the Rose/Scorpius ship even more!

loved it!

I've been gone for a while, but i am back and loving you. Again.

This was beautiful, i love your Rose/Scorpius stories.

ttyl

- Ellie

One word...

Amazing...