| Reviews for Baby Blunder |
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warfighterzack chapter 2 . 7/31 LOL do you have a penis? im dead |
Ts chapter 10 . 6/3/2019 I enjoyed this, however I found it quite sexist that everyone kept comparing Optimus to a female just because he was pregnant. Also I found Magnus really annoying, because he kept underestimating Optimus. Magnus also literally didn’t consider how Optimus was feeling, and kept making Optimus feel bad. Also you didn’t consider the fact that Optimus is a really powerful mech, that can look after himself, and doesn’t need Magnus following and stressing him over simple tasks, like being there when he as to relieve his tank. Honestly you need to think practically about how Optimus is feeling, not the other way around. Ts |
T chapter 10 . 6/3/2019 I enjoyed this, however I found it quite sexist that everyone kept comparing Optimus to a female just because he was pregnant. Also I found Magnus really annoying, because he kept underestimating Optimus. Magnus also literally didn’t consider how Optimus was feeling, and kept making Optimus feel bad. Also you didn’t consider the fact that Optimus is a really powerful mech, that can look after himself, and doesn’t need Magnus following and stressing him over simple tasks, like being there when he as to relieve his tank. Honestly you need to think practically about how Optimus is feeling, not the other way around. |
Guest chapter 10 . 6/3/2019 I enjoyed this, however I found it quite sexist that everyone kept comparing Optimus to a female just because he was pregnant. Also I found Magnus really annoying, because he kept underestimating Optimus. Magnus also literally didn’t consider how Optimus was feeling, and kept making Optimus feel bad. |
Paradox Seekeress chapter 10 . 8/23/2017 That I awesome please continue |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/25/2016 Wow...that is a smart five year old. O that was so funny! I love this! |
TFfangirl11437 chapter 10 . 8/13/2016 Please make more |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/19/2015 Please continue it I love it! |
Optimus' girl chapter 10 . 9/16/2015 OMP! What is taking you so long to update your story?! It feels like it's been forever since you had updated your wonderful story! When are Optimus and Sarah going to have their unborn baby/sparkling?! They should have had their kids a long time ago. I'm still waiting for the next chapter. |
janet1982 chapter 10 . 8/17/2015 interesting,please update) |
Optimus' girl chapter 10 . 6/14/2015 It has been almost a year since you had updated your story. When do you plan on updating your story? Myself and many of your other fans would like to see Optimus have his sparkling and for Sarah to have her baby. I have been waiting forever to read the next chapter of your wonderful story! I would wait even longer to read more of your wonderful story! Please update as soon as you possibly can, PLEASE! I'll be waiting for the next chapter. |
antubis chapter 10 . 5/15/2015 marvelous story. It is a pity that it has been so cruelly abandoned. :[ I am sure that everyone who got on this story wanted to know, what is this mysterious ship. Whoever is piloting it, friend or foe. Is Optimus gave birth to a girl or a boy? If you do not want to continue to write this great great great story, let us, the fans, although suggestions of what was to become in later chapters. Please? |
GirlWhoLovesAnime chapter 10 . 5/15/2015 Oh no! A mysterious ship! D: *Dun dun dunnnn!* Can't wait to see what happens next! :D |
SummerMistedDragon chapter 10 . 10/9/2014 Ship? Ship? Please update! What's going on! Awesome chapter! |
PrimesSPARROW chapter 10 . 8/20/2014 This is frickin awesome a pregnant Optimus I have a few of those lol |