so shes a bitch

O_O that is sooo sad memeph *teary eyes*

Ooh, very intriguing! I like this and your other Kushina one. I had never REALLY considered the possibility of her still being alive. I mean, it's always floating around in the back of the mind, but I had never encountered any manifestations of the idea before. Yours are very good.

Eldr

got your message

sorry if my review sounded harsh

now, since you mention that you are such an a* i'll not hole back

with the way you wrote in the drabble

the drabble itself is fail in its own way, because like i said the things in there are totally out of ordinary to happen form the human's point of view, hope you understand what i means, and since this is ninja world, it is my believe that majority's opinions do not count, and i think that kishi's fire council is just an pathetic excuse he pulled out of his ass just to continue the story and the events of which i believe will never happen in the real ninja world

and about being ooc, as long as it is a fanfic everything is ooc, nothing is original

the only matter is whether they are enjoyable to read or not, what i mean is even the total ass-hole characters can be fun to read, you know

and from you dribble majority of the characters in you story will be acting in a way that is not enjoyable

which is why i said that. it fail

even if you do not care about the readers and write the way you want with the story, if what the elements from the drabble indicate are true, the fic will not be a hit

the thing is, because you said you have total work behind this

i don't like see another failure fic with promising ideas

i've seen fic with over 100k to 200k words and with a single digit reviews or none at all

it's destrubing to see those fics as a fellow fiction member

i just don't want your fic to go down the same lane, if you're putting a lot of efforts into this fic

i wish you best of luck with your ideas

I think a sequel or a multi-chaptered fic would be nice.

there's only one thing i want to say here

i'll not say it's out of characters, because it is your story and yours to write :)

but i'm still seeing some out of ordinary things

i know what you are trying to imply here

so my questions is that, is sarutobi and other ninjas like the jiraiya of senin and clan heads like ino-shika-cho and some high ranked anbus who i'm certain that will not biased are stupid enough to let this thing you described happen?

i do not think so, no matter how much power the council or the ones who make the event happen, you write in this story, hold, they are nothing against the god of shinobi and the village can be run without the council, if i have to say

sure it'll be difficult but not that difficult, might even be easier without them lol, merchants can be replaced anytime, as well as the administrative team

so, it is my believe that sarutobi is not that kinda of stupid old geezer to let the council or the villagers to push him around

what i'm trying to say here is, if you truly believe what you wrote in this fic is a possible event, you need not to continue like you said you intent to

because your ideas and this fic already failed

with regards

Hey! Really liked this short drabble as it were! I enjoyed how you hinted at a deeper meaning and her hesitance at looking out of Naruto out of ear of what road it'd lead down. Overall pretty awesome!

Just a maskless ANBU... That's sad.