Reviews for The Exploress
UPlover chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
This was so sweet!
Bookity chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Cute one-shot. And It wouldn't take muh effort to make it a cte longer story, or collection of one shots showing Erika and Russell growing up.. hint hint nudge nudge ;) Just a sggestion..putting this on my alet page just in case..
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I like the idea a lot! It's very cute! I'd like to see more detail though. Slow down a little! :)
Glittering Turquoise chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Good job! Russell is happy because he has a crush on a girl just like Carl did when he first met Ellie! -
Pliffy chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
so cute but Alpha stayed and Carl is more like a father to Russel.
the jukebox chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Plus the idea of miscairrage could scare the $#*t out of him.
the jukebox chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
But wouldn't Russell have a "Medical terms" badge, or a "Birds and Bees" one, or something like that?

I mean, if there's a "trying to teach senior citizens to use a computer" badge (see the credits) or, as you said, a "Bring a smile to elders in retirement homes" badge...

Still, you're right, a third-grader shouldn't know. Heck, when I was a kid I thought baby seeds flew around in the air and flew into women at random.
Bubbles chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
lol she really seemed confuzzled! lol if i was in a blimp with a cutie I'd be like "HOLY MOTHER GOD I'M IN A BLIMP WITH A HOTTIE..*sticking head out a window*" lol. Work on how u portray their personalities. over all pretty good :)
PazzoCuore chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Aw! Thts so cute! I hope someone writes a story if Ellie Never Died . . .
mpkio2 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Aww, really cute.

And I really like you're writing style!

Write more!
Terra Young chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
I like it.