| Reviews for The Exploress |
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UPlover chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 This was so sweet! |
Bookity chapter 1 . 11/11/2010 Cute one-shot. And It wouldn't take muh effort to make it a cte longer story, or collection of one shots showing Erika and Russell growing up.. hint hint nudge nudge ;) Just a sggestion..putting this on my alet page just in case.. |
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 9/10/2010 I like the idea a lot! It's very cute! I'd like to see more detail though. Slow down a little! :) |
Glittering Turquoise chapter 1 . 5/14/2010 Good job! Russell is happy because he has a crush on a girl just like Carl did when he first met Ellie! - |
Pliffy chapter 1 . 2/12/2010 so cute but Alpha stayed and Carl is more like a father to Russel. |
the jukebox chapter 1 . 12/25/2009 Plus the idea of miscairrage could scare the $#*t out of him. |
the jukebox chapter 1 . 12/25/2009 But wouldn't Russell have a "Medical terms" badge, or a "Birds and Bees" one, or something like that? I mean, if there's a "trying to teach senior citizens to use a computer" badge (see the credits) or, as you said, a "Bring a smile to elders in retirement homes" badge... Still, you're right, a third-grader shouldn't know. Heck, when I was a kid I thought baby seeds flew around in the air and flew into women at random. |
Bubbles chapter 1 . 12/11/2009 lol she really seemed confuzzled! lol if i was in a blimp with a cutie I'd be like "HOLY MOTHER GOD I'M IN A BLIMP WITH A HOTTIE..*sticking head out a window*" lol. Work on how u portray their personalities. over all pretty good :) |
PazzoCuore chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 Aw! Thts so cute! I hope someone writes a story if Ellie Never Died . . . |
mpkio2 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009 Aww, really cute. And I really like you're writing style! Write more! |
Terra Young chapter 1 . 9/25/2009 I like it. |