I think you captured Nika's thoughts well. It's always a pleasure to find well-written stories that fill in the gulfs of emotional possibilities from a movie. Beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

Hello,is anybody in There? :) Believe me or not,I discovered fanfiction and shipping three years ago and talked with My friend about it just couple days ago...we talked about our favourite ships from times before we knew what shipping means. I came with three ships: Seth Gecko/Kate Fuller, Phoebe and Koll (Charmed) and Agent 47/Nika! Then I started digging and here I am! I devoured all fanfics in just three days! I love Your way of describing them! They are in character and so Well understood by you,it was such a pleasures reading this! I hope you're still here and who knows,maybe you reignite Your love for writing and publish something new! Kudos

Love it! You kept them in character and your use of words is magical, really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it!

Oh i loved it so much!

Really captured both of them perfectly. I think my favourite moment was his confession that he took out those other agents. Gentleman killer.

I like it!

Ahhh.. The angst..

I really enjoyed this, I love Hitman fanfictions - though, I wish there was more!

"Nika can't stop cursing under her breath, fierce spit-vulgar Russian, and her killer may be as silent as ever but she can feel his heartbeat under the thin shirt of his suit and it is answer enough."

I *love* that part, and hope to see more great stories from you. :)

Amazing dialogue, I loved reading it. Please write more!

YAY! We should so get a sequel! Great work!

you write fantastic sappy angst! Nika/47 rawr! 3

so i really liked Aftermath (you can add another one to your 1.5) but Im really loving this one more. There arent enough good hitman stories out there but all of yours are great and they always feel like a possible post movie scenario. It would be great if you did follow up on this plot but it still reads great as it is.

very nice. my favorite one is six. very heart i forstreadit,when i came to the part were Nika clasps onto 47,i started to cry a little bit, the description is really amazing, i could really imagine that picture.

Excellent story, please continue writing, I share the same passion for agent 47 and Nika, loves to see more sequel to this story. WOW!

I really love the detail and clarity in your writing. These two characters can be so complicated, and so excellent- the kind of banter they have, the edge and occasional sweetness of Nika, and the harsh perfectionism and suppressed gentleness of 47.

You seem to really have a great gauge for these two. I especially love your writing in Nika's voice.

...I know actual kudos are rare in the wild world of the interwebs, but this pretty much rocks. Write more, please. I'm working on getting the courage up myself, and am inspired by those that do.

-G