| Reviews for Take Control |
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   juliamlinaric.as chapter 11 . 10/30/2019 Now I can die happy! |
| suki kuran chapter 11 . 2/23/2018 Awww absolutely love this story! Its perfect few spelling and grammer mistakes but who cares the story absolutely in love with it keep up the story writing! |
| sherryfanfic1999 chapter 11 . 4/23/2017 Well, you have new ideas for this couple, so just go from there. You can only get better! I still wanted to know what happened to Cross though. XP |
| sherryfanfic1999 chapter 10 . 4/23/2017 Very interesting predicament Lena has found herself in. Knowing Bak, he may not even care who the father is and want her anyway, but Lavi will probably want to be in his child's life. I hope it's just a scare, but somewhere deep down, I think she should have been more careful. Bak is mature. He may have children of his own if he is as old as they make his sound. Anyways, with Kanda and Allen, Waiting on the 'I LOVE YUUS' from them. Make it cute. I have one more chapter to read. Allen been with Kanda for months, but I know Cross hasn't given up on Allen making him money, has he? Was Cross abusive to Allen? He seemed so scared of him. What kind of 'Master' was he? And why has Kanda not questioned the term 'Master' in the first place? Who calls their adoptive parent MASTER anyways? Well, we will have to wait on that. Really enjoying. Thanks for the reads. |
| sherryfanfic1999 chapter 9 . 4/23/2017 I'm glad you started again then. I really enjoy this fic. Thanks. |
| DragonInsanity chapter 10 . 11/8/2016 That was great, I hope to see more |
| Kyouko Hori chapter 10 . 7/18/2015 I hope you continue this story. Its really good and I'm absolutely loving it. Its just slightly confusing on the time skip. Maybe if you could do something about it, that would be great! |
| devit-jasdevi chapter 10 . 1/15/2015 I just finished this story and I love it. Hope u can update it soon :3 |
| xXBakandaAndMoyashiXx chapter 10 . 1/4/2015 HOLY SSHHHHIIIIII-OOOOOTTT, This was a pretty good chapter, Can't wait till the next one! Also, Since i finally remembered my password to my account (how smart am I? Yea!) Your an amazing writer, one of my favorites. Keep writing! And may you have a good 2015! |
| NaiveFairy chapter 10 . 12/19/2014 Continue! I really like this! I really actually do... - Red. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/17/2014 oh my god rotten timing lavi poor llen you are so so cruel writer san |
| ZyiareHellsing chapter 10 . 12/16/2014 Yeah! ! |
| PearlesantlRose chapter 10 . 12/15/2014 So when I saw there was a new chapter five this I decided to reread the entire story. It took me a day or two as I was working and stuff too. So, anyways I love this story! I really do hope you continue writing and give us more chapters. |
| SassAlchemist chapter 10 . 12/14/2014 This story is amazing! I love it sooooo much! |
| Hitsugayalover17 chapter 10 . 12/14/2014 Thank you so much, awesome story :) |
