really good

Please update, this is an excellent story!

awsome story

YAY, you updated! :D And Alonzo's back!

I love how Lonzy's freaked out by all this, and Griddlebone's as awesome as ever, poor Mungojerrie, hope Griddlebone won't be TOO hard on him ;) and this is a really long run-on :o

I know you won't be able to update for about a month, maybe more, but don't worry, I'll still be here to read Ch. 12 when it arrives :)

woah! i LOVED it! (obviously) too bad you wont be able to update for a month...but ill be focusing on my two stories in the meantime, cuz you're the only story i follow that actually updates...

anyway, i loved how you brought Mungojerrie back into it! & the ending was a great cliffhanger...I'm still loving how you portray Griddlebone and...all the characters.)

Darn! I've started seeing a connection between Griddlebone and another character I hate! Griddlebone's so awesome and her being so sadistic is perfect but I can't stop making the connection! I love your touch with the heart bit, and the image of her covered in blood. it's a great chapter even considering all the gore, i'm surprised Macavity didn't do anything more twisted though. Plus, Alonzo's finally coming back, HUZZAH!

WOW! that was so gory, but cool! you DID give a warning, so thanks for that...i cant wait to see Alonzo in the next chapter!

...Bestests? I know, being meticulous again, as always...flattering,though...yeah.

Cool gory chapter. I like gore, though I don't like putting details. I can't describe it anyway...

Btw, can you check out my CATS story? And put as much sadism as you can in your review, if you think you should? Thanks...

Griddlebone! o She and Macavity have the most twisted sense of humor...I LOVE how she knows how to make Macavity feel better that way. 'Tis a great gory-thriller-somewhat-psychotic chapter.

8D does that mean Alonzo's gonna be back? *hugs said patched tom*

Can't wait for the next update!

Eehn-tay-reztink...do continue...though it's slash-centric...it's intriguing...never mind all the dots I love putting in...

Great chapter, the ending's really good and suspensful; even if a litle clichéd. I'm glad to see Griddlebone back, she really pushes Macavity close to the brink.

I kinda miss Alonzo though, he's been moping in a jail cell to long. It's great to see Macavity continue to get more complex as the story goes, I find it incredible just how much he hates Munk that he gets so cold and evil. Plus, Jemima's finally warming up towards her father even if only a little bit, that's great.

ahh the suspence is killing mee! i cant wait to see what happens with Alonzo left...& Macavity's...gay self! )

WOHO Update

I love Macavity in this chapter him being the daddy type actually makes him lees evil, but hes still big ol Maccy poo :P and when Jemima gave the warning to Macavity that made me shiver

And Exotica I love how macavity labels her as an "Old acquaintance of mine" and :O :O she helped him steal Demeter I guess that explains how he got Demeter so easily, he had inside help

And Yea I would also Like to know that Who is older then who or are they born at the same time hm... *scratches head in wonderment*

I love griddlebone and how she knows she can get away with things, and is some how taking advantage of Macavity, shes spicy :P

Yes, an update! And a Griddlebone cameo!

I love Daddy Macavity, 'cause he's so complex and almost evil but not quite. This chapter as of now is one of my favorites, it's really good! And little Jemima's warming to him...a little. Just a teensy little bit :D

Just one question, toward the end, is Macavity younger than Munkustrap, or is it the other way around? I'm not sure if it's a continuity thing, or something else.

"Give my regards to my younger brother, will you?" Macavity said to Demeter.

Munkustrap continued to look to the spot where his younger brother had disappeared.

Otherwise, I think that's it _ Quite awesome.

Oy, Exotica's seductive. To think she got Macavity to trust her so easily, it's just... it's just... wow. I love her character but I hate her because it looks like she's the one who made Macavity completely evil.