Please write a sequel

nice. took 5 secs

I love Claudia's internal dialogue0 here.

your a cocky little fucker i like that hehehe :)

Really liked this story. I like the way you write. Story keep me reading, Hope you will do more.

I gotta admit, despite this little twist(which considering this was written during(?) season one, was kind of amusing), this story is pretty shallow. There just doesn't feel like there's any real motivation for the characters. Especially Myka.

That said, ya know what this story needs? A cut away to Pete and Artie in California pimpin' it without Myka there to cramp their style. "Alright ladies, who wants some of the Teddy Bear?" -Laugh-

Makokam out.

That was not a cliffhanger. A cliffhanger implies that we are left in doubt as to the outcome of a situation. We all know how Myka kissing Claudia is going to turn out.

The ending to this chapter was BULLSHIT!
-laugh-

I am curious if you actually have some sort of plan for why Pete is acting weird and why Artie is flying out to see him instead of having him come back...or if you're just bullshitting your way to some Myka/Claudia alone time.

Makokam out.

"With a sad smile Claudia stood up and went to fix the vacuum.

'I wouldn't touch that if I were you.' Artie said from behind them."

This was a /really/ awkward transition. And while we're at it, this period, "-if I were you.'" - right there, should be a comma. Just saying. For future reference.

Other than that, it wasn't that bad. Looking forward to seeing how this goes.

Loved it. :)

Name of the car. Is it named after a movie character by chance haha :) I'm enjoying this story so far, good work

Dang this story is hot! Thank you for writing it - Claudia is just so damn fine and I've always wanted her to be gay!

Loved reading this x

I'm a Myka/HG fan but this wasn't too bad. I'll agree, Allison's hot.

Pretty good

Excellent story! It actually had a plot and wasn't too OOC, live it!