| Reviews for The Last Bell |
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01110011100001111 chapter 1 . 6/28/2011 I read this little one-shot ages ago, before I'd ever created a profile. I was drawn to it immediately by the title, as it called up some nostalgic memories straight outta the gate. I really liked it then, and nothing has changed since. I particularly enjoyed the scene with Carly, likely because I've always sorta wanted Freddie to "win" at least once in that department. Haha... it's painful to watch a young guy throw himself at someone who doesn't seem even remotely interested. The ending is gold though dude... you couldn't have "resolved" that situation in a more hilarious and mildly melancholy fashion. Poor Freddie - he's gotta face the music sometime. A lesser, more hormonal, more dishonorable fellow wouldn't have been so bummed and apprehensive about it I think. He's cursed with decency. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2011 Loved this :) Made me smile at the end |
cameddie chapter 1 . 1/21/2011 Freddie's so lucky :P |
SeddieThunder chapter 1 . 9/28/2010 hahaha that was awesome! great job again :D |
castrophrenia chapter 1 . 5/24/2010 This made me laugh so much I freaked out an entire group of bored coworkers. Being able to read fic on my phone may not be the best innovation, but it was definitely rather entertaining trying to explain what my phone did that was so high-larious. And in a strange way I could see this actually happening in one way or another on the show. Of course perhaps with eloquence than you've given it but, still. Thanks so much for sharing. |
Blushing.Violet chapter 1 . 1/27/2010 Hehehe. x) Freddie, you doof. Ah well, better to avoid the conflict if both of them were to say what I thought they were anyway. Beautifully written; I'm always a sucker for styles like this. It's full of depth and imagery, really puts you -into- the story. Ya gotta love Gibby though, what would we do without the shirtless boy wonder? :P |
nekoken chapter 1 . 1/23/2010 Man that was funny with him jumping in the locker. But I was looking for some Sam Carly action. But o well great story hope its continued like I said on a few of your other stories. Now on to the next that catches my eye |
cliche catastrophe chapter 1 . 10/7/2009 This gave me some laughs. I actually had a feelng we wouldn't find out what they both wanted to tell him. I had some idea, but Freddie's cowardly ways were much funnier. And Gibby in the locker beside him. "Freddie." "Yeah?" "You in your locker too?" Sigh. "Yeah." "Sometimes it's okay being a coward." "Yeah." Pause. "When it's safe to come out, you wanna go get a burger." This dialogue was hilarious. I can just imagine them in their lockers, beside eachother, looking submissively out the vents and talking. |
Limstella chapter 1 . 10/1/2009 That was SO totally not the ending i was expecting! This is a GREAT insight into freddie's character, and it's also an excellent way to introduce the more mature topics of life that the iCarly gang is so painfully ready to handle, while still keeping all of them in character and maintaining a delcious air of mystery at all times! you clearly have a Grand fortE for stories of revelation as opposed to revolution. |
Coffee-Kun chapter 1 . 9/13/2009 Lol, I guess Gibby got Freddie in the end! XD! |
AwkwardSquirrel chapter 1 . 9/13/2009 Oh, God. Oh god oh god oh god! I wanna know what it was! This was amazing, and I love the ending, but still... I mean, whatever, it's your (awesome) story. Great job! |
Kallusive chapter 1 . 9/13/2009 very excellent one-shot! |
GIVEmeSEDDIEorGIVEmeDEATH chapter 1 . 9/11/2009 cool story update soon |
SheWhoDaydreams chapter 1 . 9/11/2009 Lol. Oh Freddie. And Gibby. I thought this was funny. And adorable. Not sure if that's what you wanted, but I still liked it. |
Reviewer chapter 1 . 9/11/2009 I LOVED that! Both the seddie AND creddie were cute, something hard to pull off in on fic, but you did it! (yay for you!) I also love how it was written, AND it was funny! Great job! |