Okay... I frickin' love this! I love the style. I love the two different view points, the dialogue (inner thoughts) and the narrator. It was just a wonderful read and went along perfectly with the character, in my opinion.

I really enjoyed the style of this story!

DAVE MCKEAN! That's his name! And he's a star in his own right! He's a very talented artist and author, and he really did most of the work on MirrorMask anyway. He co-wrote the screenplay, story, he directed AND designed the film. (rant over)

Anyway good story.

I loved it,Good job keep it coming :)

O, will there be more? I really like it! I love how you wrote it, too.