Reviews for Sex Cheques
Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2012
You see, I would totally give you teh ideas...but I fail at life so I can't think of anything XD
This is a ridiculously entertaining story and I really hope you can update soon ;3
Keep up the good work! :3
Nissa chapter 3 . 8/23/2010
I enjoy reading this over and over again lol.

I think you should irhgt about after school, Axel making Zexy watch porn and teaching him about different "toys". Of course Axel would say what better then to learn "hands on" and he gets to use them on Zexy. Meanwhile Dem and Rox at the mall. Lol.
TheJuicyDangler chapter 3 . 7/10/2010
I said I'd start reviewing, didn't I?

Haha, well, I like it. :D

'Nuff said? I hope so, because there's not much else to say. :)

xxJojo
XxXGlitzXxXandXxXGlamXxX chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
Aha, poor Axel, the horny bastard P

Naw, I wuffles him. But it's true. x)
someone u don no chapter 3 . 6/30/2010
wow you really captured Axel's bastredly-ness
Wicked Winter chapter 3 . 6/30/2010
I giggled when I read this.

You are awesome
JJKMagic chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
You're probably pretty busy with other stories right now, just wanted to ask if you intend to continue this one. It's hilarious!
alexlyoko13 chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
I love it, update soon
Tori Uzumaki chapter 3 . 2/21/2010
Well written story, good job! :)

Oh, and the song by the Bloodhound Gang that you quoted at the end of chapter three, though many refer to it as "The Discovery Channel" song, its real name is "The Bad Touch" I just thought I'd let you know.

It is a very well written story please update soon.
FrostedDiamond chapter 3 . 11/28/2009
in this next chapter, you should totally have them on an anniversary, with the romantic dinner and some kind of thing before hand. . .some awesome activity. and then move on to the anniversary sex _
blood as soft as silk chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
this story is very entertaining. xD Lol it had me giggling through the whole story. love it and i can't wait for more.
bored spitless chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
ok. :D
bored spitless chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
hello, you seem busy and you can't get around to your PM's so i'll message you here. What i meant is, Roxas asks Zexion, what was axel showing you?

Zexion is embarrassed and tells him what it was.

Roxas blushes and asks him to show him.

Zexion does.

bam. it's just a suggesstion. you don't have to use it.
bored spitless chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
snaps! *nosebleed* *gasp* dirty dirty boys! hehe amazing. um ideas? hm. i don't knwo. lie. obviously, smex. another one, uh, roxas asks zexion what he was doing. asks him to show him. blushing the whole time. just a suggestion.
Light Within Darkness chapter 3 . 10/12/2009
“Vile, vile creature you are, Axel. Vile and disgusting.”

Very, very true Zexy. I'm not sure why I still love him, sometimes. But I do. :3

AWESOME! Me love. I laughed, I cried, I laughed again at the end. My dear, you are a fabulous writer and this is a fabulous story.

Keep that hawt-ness coming!

~LWD~
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