| Reviews for Arc II: The Blood That Binds |
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Guest chapter 3 . 8/10/2017 I am really enjoying this story. Please finish it |
Shipposmykid chapter 3 . 6/14/2017 I am 7 years late but are you ever going to update? |
Chulse chapter 3 . 7/19/2014 I read the first part of this story on deviantart years back, I always wanted to read it again. When I discovered you had removed everything from your dA account I was soooo disappointed, but I found you on here so all is well. I adore your writing style it is clear, to the point and very descriptive and extremely unique and I am amazed that this arc and the first doesn't have more attention and it rightly deserves a whole lot more. When ever I fancy a bit of a binge on fanfiction this story comes to mind, the plot bunnies in your mind are amazing and my morbid curiosity will continue to want to read on. A few things I'm unsure about - why has Sakura's last name changed and as other reviews have stated its a bit unclear about her memories being altered or not. Best wishes! |
Bumper Chan chapter 3 . 6/13/2012 You write great and I read Arc 1 but now I'm really confused with what's going on. Did Sakura have her memories erased? Who's getting married? Why was Nami killed? Why did Kakashi need to be harsh? Kakashis character had changed majorly and I don't understand why... |
Akatsuki no Loki chapter 3 . 2/18/2012 Arc I was fantastic and so far Arc II is just as good. I can't wait to see what happens with Kakashi and Sakura and of course Sasuke. Hopefully you'll update soon. |
Kaly-Lynn chapter 3 . 1/11/2011 PLEASE UPDATE! I'm dying here. D; |
cowgirl137 chapter 2 . 8/16/2010 SO WHY DID YOU KILL NAMI? THAT MAKES ME SAD! And Why does it seem like Sakura naow hates Kakashi... and and and Wats up w/ him kidnapping her? I NEED ANSWERS! *Pouty Face* Update soon PLEASE! |
Wicken25 chapter 3 . 7/12/2010 I don't understand your story line and i even read the first Arc and I am so confused when I started reading this one...please explain what is going on. Did Sakura have all of her memories with Kikashi be erased so she didn't remember being in love with him? Was the marriage suppose to be between Sasuke and Sakura? Why did you kill Naruto's child? WHere is Sasuke? What is going on and please explain! |
venus hawthorne chapter 3 . 6/20/2010 I was wondering if i was the only one confused but after reading some of the reviews, i guess i'm not. I'm confused as to how it went from last ch of arc I (sakura and kakashi sleeping together) to sakura going to the uchi compound... why did she get her memory erased? And why is she and kakashi so different from how they were acting in the first arc? I was hoping you'd clear some things up, or include a prologue type of chapter linking the two? |
ThorneSmith chapter 3 . 6/10/2010 the best damn fanfic ive read. |
CraftyThestral chapter 3 . 6/3/2010 I'm sorry, I LOVED the first Arc, but this one is just too drastic of a change for me to continue reading. Kakashi is almost completely different and it has an entriely different feel to it, too morbid and WAY too confusing to continue reading. |
Hishinata Nara chapter 3 . 5/15/2010 ok ive read the first arc and loved it. but im REALLY confused in the second one. so i was wondering if the current events will become clearer in future chapters. |
Jackiez chapter 1 . 5/4/2010 heey, I've read your fiction and I really liked it, so I wanted to know if you are going to continue "Arc II: The Blood That Binds"? because a believe it is really good and I would like to read the rest of the story :) looking forward for an update! |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/25/2010 kakashi is realy different in this story. it's kinda frightening. it realy is a good story but so far it's just grim and morbid. i love how kick ass sakura is though! but maybe the character change in kakashi is a little TOO drastic. i look forward to the next update! |
kolodny chapter 1 . 10/16/2009 I just finished your other story (to clarify, i printed out all 280 pages of it and got NO work done today) and enjoyed it. I was a bit miffed at the ending, so I returned seeking sequel. I've read this chapter over a few times, but am confused. Perhaps a second chapter can help clarify where this plot is going. Also, I know is ridiculous when it comes to uploading stories, but the underlining is very distracting. I leaned toward a natural emphasis on those words anyway, or a bold or italic (preferable) would be much more subtle. Thank you! |