daaaaaaamn this is perfectly in character. I could just imagine this happening weekly and Trent lovng himself for it.

Such a cute and fun read! I enjoyed it! Thank you for writing it :)

Love this game. And love these boys :D

Hawt. Nuff said. Also yaoi is love, yaoi is life.

This Was My First Bully Fanfic Ever Read, And It Was Awesome

AMAZING XD i love how you write Kirby. SO PERFECT X)

loved it! w

oh Trent you evil boy-loving muffin XD i loved it, write more. NOW

“What the hell, Trent? I nearly shit a brick, I thought you were some fag feeling me up!”

Trent rubbed his punched eye. “I am a fag, and I was feeling you up.”

Fucking hell I pissed maself!

Hmm.. short but funny and sexy. I liked it. Guess I'll play a little later.

“I am a fag, and I was feeling you up.”

~ I actually almost cried with laughter, and I don't know why it was so funny XD This was brilliant for your first fanfiction! :)

This.

I enjoyed this. Perhaps too much.

Good job!

Ah! I'm so glad someone else is adding to the Trent/Kirby fandom! I probably should, but...-epic lazy-

It was really good! I saw one time you said "Mr" without a period, but, I'm a grammar nazi. XD

I love flustered-reluctant-but-he-knows-he-wants-it!Kirby. Keep it up!

That was so AMAZING! I love me the KirbyxTrent ;D

Write more! ...please? :3

OMG so cute and it had it's funny moments. This is exactly how I would picture these two. Love it!