So good, just really good.

This was a wonderful way of putting it :) You wrote them both very IC, and it was very enjoyable :D Well done!

nice story, and great idea. Very well-written.

Great story, very sweet

Ah, thank you! I'm so happy that SOMEONE cleared this up. And very cute story too :) I love Ron's POV

This is cute. You had a few typos here and there, but mostly, this is fine. I like it (:

~Rae

This is neat! The first story I've read incorporating something that's totally from fandom into an event that's cannon and making the whole thing believable and could in fact, fit into part of cannon. You write a good story and hope to read more from you, especially romantic ones about Ron and Hermione!

Ah man.

I like this one :D

You never showed me this.

Howhale. I loved it :)

that was really cute! great job!

Cute story.

this is so aweet! keep up the good work!