I FREAKING LOVE THIS IDEA! And the doctor visit was hella funny. This story is just...yes, lol! (so, is this your theory on his scar?)

YES! I freaking love this! I felt so bad for him when he got cut...but I like Shego's quick thinking. And the "Puppies cookies world domination" thing was funny and so in character. Great writing!

Just so much D'aaaww

"Nice fake name you gave them in the emergency room."
There was an extremely awkward silence, which Drakken broke by coughing."

insert awkward cough, lol.

"I love you, you love me, we're a happy family..."
Barf.
Flip.
"You get the be-ee-est of both worlds..."
Double barf.

Clearly Shego is only a fan of the best cartoons. So she watches Dan Vs and cheers when he gets revenge on things.

"Fine. But if I do die, I'm docking your paycheck!"
Durr."

Heh, silly Drakken.

"In an interview with the creators and writers of Kim Possible, the question was brought up, "How did Drakken get his scar?" One of them responded that "I always imagined he had an itch and forgot he was holding something sharp..."

Huh...I kinda just thought they would leave that unexplained, but yeah, that totally fits, and I've seen and/or heard of people doing dumber things anyway.

nice. Not to mention in character. I can see the whole family aspect. I mean it's the only reason shego would come back after going to prison for him.

Omgggggg, this is a practically perfect story. I was amazed by how in-character you kept them. I was cracking up through the whole thing, and their relationship was just so wonderfully drawn. I loved the background about Shego's family - it was so simple and sweet. AHHHHH. SO GOOD. SO. GOOD.

Good story! :D

Delicious story. I also tend to see them in more of that light, and you do a wonderful job bringing that out. Great touch with Shego's family.

awwwww! Okay, this might be one of the sweetest stories, EVER! It is soo happy and i love stuff like this!

Cute story,

Drakken and Shego seemed to be pretty much in character, especially for their early days as a team.

keep up the good writing,

reader101w

“Fine. But if I do die, I’m docking your paycheck!”

Is that anything like mom yelling "If you break your legs, don't come running to me!" :) Good stuff!

Nicely wrapped up. :)

Good story- good grammar and spelling, well-written in general and with lots of humorous little details. Good for a few laughs, but also has a strong emotional foundation. I suspected in the previous chapter that Shego would realize her little list included more people than her brothers. Shego's softer side is easy to mess up in fics, but you did it just right. Both her and Drakken's reactions to the situation seemed in character, but also just a little more 'human'/'real' than on the show- in a good way.

I'm gonna fave it here at FF Net, but since it's anti-D/S, I can't really recommend it over at my D/S site- though I doubt you'll be losing any sleep over that. ;)

Very funny story. I liked the interactions between Drakken abd Shego, and a lot of lines made me laugh. Really enjoyed it.

(This review applies to chapter 1 and 2, but for some reason the site won't let me review for chapter 2.)

Very cute story. I like the characterization of Shego. I hope you write more like this. It is a nice change of pace from the D/S romance.

And just an FYI, there's a "reply to review" button that will let you e-mail/PM/whatevs replies to the reviewees and not have to review your own story.

I almost didn't realize there was a second chapter. But I'm really glad I did. I actually laughed out loud a couple times here, like when Drakken gave his real name and Shego thought he was being especially creative in his alias. Great job with this!