Amazing story. Thank you for sharing.

As I read the first chapter, I was thinking "this might not be worth itno offense, really) but I kept reading to give it a chance, and it gradually became better. More solid. The chapters became better; dialogue, personalities, interactions all seemed to flow much better. It's a great feat when an author manages to make a reader cry. It's for this reason that I like to read stories that were written over a long period of time; I can see all the progress they've made as an author within that time.

i really liked it

I liked it

Wow so I've been up since like 11 pm reading this and taking breaks for awhile and now its like past 5 in the morning! I'm not even tired because I'm just in shock with how amazing this fanfic is! This is how the anime should have been; they should've put this "love story" plot inside. Thank you for investing your time into writing this because I absolutely loved it (:

This was a really good fic!

Well done!

I think your demon nursery rhymes were really awesome!

I kinda wanted to find out how they ended!

This chapter was really funny when it got to the maids outfit part!

When I read the warnings and started reading the chapter I was like if they're going shopping how does the cross dressing work? I burst out laughing when I got to the answer!

Really good chapter!

It's a beautiful story, very well paced and moving in all the right moments. I love how you 'distribute' the scenes and their lengths so they're neither tediously long nor stingily short.

The only thing that was a bit bothersome (for me) is that in the first chapters (maybe 'till the 5th or 6th?) you change Ciel's age a couple of times so it 'crashed' my brain (because of the incoherent internal time flow of the story) thus the flow of the scene.

Thanks for sharing! 3

Sulix~

Oh my God! Sebastian was just way too hot and sexy in this selection that I practically fell in-love with him. It's a very beautiful story... although there were certain parts in it that I felt were a little bit rushed but it didn't really matter in the end, since the end portion was so perfectly made that I nearly cried.

There were a lot of scenes here that I liked, but what really did me in was the part where Ciel (out of his frustration most probably) had asked Sebastian to lie to him and tell him that he is in-love with Ciel. Talk about angst girl! You nailed that one on the head.

Anywhoo... I would like to see more stories on Ciel and Sebastian from you. Hope to see you post more soon! :)

Ohmigod I love you! Amazing, simply amazing! I have to admit I didn't like the heterosexual parts but still amazing! I did cry at some parts so yeah...

how does this even have praise

lol wtf

*sniff sniff* T3T this has got to be one of the best fanfictions I have ever read! I started it last night and finished this morning (but I was too engrossed with the chapters so I didn't reiew to any of them except this one so I'll make this review count for all of them). this was a really amazing and deep story that people can relate to! I mean the whole Samael being in love with Eve then Eve running away from him, people can relate to that! It was an amazing story!

Overall it was a great story. Fans always hunger for more and so forth. You had great detail and emotion in your work, and even sometimes beautifully poetic. But now that I'm finished praising you, I must point out things that either annoyed me or seemed unnatural. First, I'll start off gentle. You repeated some description of the characters way too much-you must always be fresh with the characters you describe. Second, would be the characters themselves. While Ciel remained stubborn, even after his dramatic change he was missing his "I will be dominant here" attitude. He didn't come forth as stubborn as he was supposed to. He also didn't have that cruel, killer side to him he did in the manga and even the anime. And on to Sebastian. While I knew the idea of him caring for a human was far fetched, I can't say I minded it. There was something else that simply didn't fit at all. If Sebastian were to actually try to comfort Ciel, it would probably be hard for him. And if he managed, it would be in a clever, hidden fashion. Another thing would be you didn't express anything on how the two fought around to be the dominant partner-which is partially what their relaionship is. A fight for dominance. I highly doubt Ciel would truely give in and let the demon do as he pleased at all. And if he would, it would only be after giving his own share. Let me explain it this way-A master eats dinner before his dog to make sure he doesn't beg. Another problem with Sebastian is his hate for "god" and "gods" in general. When Prince Soma (or Souma) enter in the manga, later chapters explain Agni's past and how Soma was like a real god to him. And Sebastian replies under his breath, "Yes, but real gods are truely useless creatures." He also seemed annoyed by the subject, indicating his hate for holy creatures. While I can find myself to love and hate the ending, seeing as it doesn't fit Sebastian, I thoroughly enjoyed this fanfic. One of my favorite parts would be when Ciel had to be locked up in the Mental Institute. LOL! Overall I would rate this 4/5. Congrats!

OK I liked story but the cursing is out context for early england couture