OH NO YOU DON'T MASON LANCER TORTURED COLBY SENSELESSLY WITH POISON HE NEEDS TO KNOW ANOUT KERRI NOW SEQUEL OR REWRITE TO MAKE LONGER

Amazing story that pulled me in from the start and kept me hooked all the way through. Loved it.

Wow. What an ending. Totally surprised me. Poor Kerri and Colby. Brilliant work, once more. Normally not a fan of OC's, but this one is good :)

I remember reading few chapters of this story a while back. I haven't read the whole thing yet but I love it so far. Great job!

What happened to all your reviews?

That was a totally unexpected twist. I had been trying to think what was so horrible she couldn't tell Colby and, I admit, that one never crossed by mind. Wow.

Hope you don't cool your heels too long thinking about it. I'm very interested in seeing how this will continue.

Hope to see you soon.

Omg that's so mean! what's going to happen? Can't wait

til the next story.

Really enjoyed this... I hope you intend to tell us what happens between Kerri and Colby, his reaction to finding out she's his torturer's daughter would make for an interesting story.

Would he go completely off the rails or just shrug it off and move on? Hm.

Wow... did not see that one coming through all her description till the very end. Nice, very nice twist.

You will not be taking any time off from writing, this story is not marked complete you will have to post chapter 19 ASAP!